dont tell me you love me

September 24, 2009
Don’t tell me you love me,

If it’s just a bunch of lies,

Don’t tell me you are sorry,

If your just going to make me cry.

Don’t hug me and kiss me and make me feel safe,

Because all you do is hurt me baby;

You make me want to die.

I love you

I miss you

I feel broken inside

I miss your love,

I miss you by my side.

This thing we had,

You said forever.

Don’t you again ever

Lie to me ever.

You have my heart,

Now give it back

If your feelings aren’t true,

My feelings

I can’t help myself

Because I’m in love with you

That heart of mine,

No I’d rather you keep it,

It was really only meant for you.

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SarahZ said...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 3:26 pm
wow I love this poem. I can relate to it 100% a guy told me he loved me and all the other junk and then well you know th keep writing!
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:58 pm
thankss (: and guys i dont trust them anymore
XXcrazy_amazingXX said...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 10:38 am
This is a really good poem. I think it could maybe use a little work, but it's really good. Keep it up!
Th3k!DWr!tE5 said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 10:10 pm
Dude I almost wanna cry after reading this!! I'm this predicament and it hurts. But anyway it's really perfect thank you for writing this.
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 7:50 am
from some of the comments ive been geting lately on the like break up poems alota people are, i am currently trying to get over someone and trying to get thru it, its hard and it hurts but you will be able to do it
choirchic said...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 9:46 pm
i love the way the poem is written. it is really good
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 6, 2009 at 7:52 am
thank you!
princess;not*at*all said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 10:52 pm
This poem discribes me so much! I love how this poem is written:)
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 7:51 am
thanks so much(:
kiska_puppy11 said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 8:32 pm
Wow, I really like this poem! I like how you switch emotions from wanting and disliking... :)
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 7:51 am
thank you!!!
nixy0619 said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 5:44 pm
wow i know exactly how you feel... or how the poem's tone is anyways
kaylabaylaxo189 replied...
Oct. 5, 2009 at 7:52 am
this is entirely based on feelings, and they are mine and how i feel, this is what im going through right now
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