dont tell me you love me

September 24, 2009
By kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Don’t tell me you love me,


If it’s just a bunch of lies,


Don’t tell me you are sorry,


If your just going to make me cry.


Don’t hug me and kiss me and make me feel safe,


Because all you do is hurt me baby;


You make me want to die.



I love you


I miss you


I feel broken inside



I miss your love,


I miss you by my side.



This thing we had,


You said forever.


Don’t you again ever


Lie to me ever.



You have my heart,


Now give it back


If your feelings aren’t true,



My feelings


I can’t help myself


Because I’m in love with you



That heart of mine,


No I’d rather you keep it,


It was really only meant for you.


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This article has 13 comments.


on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:58 pm
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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thankss (: and guys i dont trust them anymore

on Oct. 12 2009 at 3:26 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

wow I love this poem. I can relate to it 100% a guy told me he loved me and all the other junk and then well you know th erest..lol keep writing!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 10:38 am
xxjosiexx143 SILVER, Lexington Twp., Maine
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This is a really good poem. I think it could maybe use a little work, but it's really good. Keep it up!

on Oct. 6 2009 at 7:52 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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thank you!

on Oct. 6 2009 at 7:50 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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from some of the comments ive been geting lately on the like break up poems alota people are, i am currently trying to get over someone and trying to get thru it, its hard and it hurts but you will be able to do it

on Oct. 5 2009 at 10:10 pm
Th3k!DWr!tE5 BRONZE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Onward ever, backward never
- My dad

Dude I almost wanna cry after reading this!! I'm this predicament and it hurts. But anyway it's really perfect thank you for writing this.

on Oct. 5 2009 at 9:46 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i love the way the poem is written. it is really good

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:52 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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this is entirely based on feelings, and they are mine and how i feel, this is what im going through right now

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:51 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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thank you!!!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:51 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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thanks so much(:

on Oct. 4 2009 at 10:52 pm
Brokenlover GOLD, Albany, Oregon
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This poem discribes me so much! I love how this poem is written:)

on Oct. 4 2009 at 8:32 pm
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Wow, I really like this poem! I like how you switch emotions from wanting and disliking... :)

on Oct. 4 2009 at 5:44 pm
nixy0619 SILVER, Miramar, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
I never know what i am about to say until i do...

wow i know exactly how you feel... or how the poem's tone is anyways


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