just another guy

September 24, 2009
By kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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Well too much is going through my head

I cant take all those thoughts

When my head hits the pillow

And the lights are off

Something that should be quiet and peaceful

but its not

It is racing and running

With no where to stop

The words they replay in my head

Over and over

I know what you said.

I can’t believe it

I didn’t even know

You broke me

You used me

For your own little gain

You caused me this pain

I cry at night

Wishing for you

I still love you,

Yes its true.

The way i felt when I looked at you

Is just the feeling that raced through me

The thoughts, the feelings, the love was true

I wish i still had you

I’m a mess with you gone

I should have known this was gunna happen all along

You used me

You broke me

You made me cry,

But i should have known you are just another guy


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on Oct. 5 2009 at 4:56 pm
wow that is just...wow it is so true too, keep writting

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:50 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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thanks to you both!

on Oct. 5 2009 at 7:49 am
kaylabaylaxo189 GOLD, Chicago, Illinois
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aww your gunna make me cry,

thanks so much, this was after a really bad breakup, but for me even tho i have feelings for him my rule to myself is "if he wants to be in your life he will make it happen"

on Oct. 4 2009 at 10:56 pm
Brokenlover GOLD, Albany, Oregon
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This poem made me cry! I'm feeling exactly that right now. But how do you know their just another guy? I'm so confused! UGH! You're an amazing writer. this poem gave me hope that I can build the bridge to get over him, then burn it so he can't cross. :)

TigerLynn GOLD said...
on Oct. 4 2009 at 10:07 pm
TigerLynn GOLD, Maysville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"She walks in beauty,
Like the night of cloudless climes and starry skies;
And all that's best of dark and bright
Meet in her aspect and her eyes."
--Byron

Been there...your words express my feelings. Thank you.

on Oct. 4 2009 at 8:35 pm
music_lover PLATINUM, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
MY quote: "Without music, life would be absolutely pointless.... Music is my life and it always will be!"

Awww.... this makes me want to cry! :) I have never been through anything like this, but from your writing it makes me feel your words. Keep writing!


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