When she looks the prettiest This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

Her makeup was washed away,
By the day,
Her hair has fallen around her face,
In brown wavy locks,
Her smile once lit up the room,
But now she is sleeping,
What a sweet angel,
And I can't help but fall,
No matter what she says,
I think this,
Is when she looks the prettiest …

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.






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alymarie3 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 2:09 pm
That sounds like the poems my bf writes me and i love them so ur special someone will too
 
star22 said...
Jan. 21, 2011 at 1:58 pm
that is so sweet! that would prolbably be the nicest thing a gut to ver say to a girl.
 
ashleykaye said...
Nov. 16, 2010 at 8:55 am
i really like this im writing about for my english class!
 
cookiemonstercutie said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 8:51 pm
its so sweet i love it
 
zombienoodlehead This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 6:27 pm
awwwww lol i love the pic an da poem!
 
redfishcatefish said...
Feb. 8, 2010 at 5:14 pm
this is simply amazing.
 
AmnyR said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 7:03 pm
very sweet!
 
Sydney P. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 7:28 am
This is so sweet and well written <3
 
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