Depression

September 11, 2009
By Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.


Depression is gray; dull, dark gray
It sounds like an empty silence
It tastes like flavorless food
It smells like smoke, but not a nice, hickory smoke; a smoke that makes you cough
It looks like an overcast sky
Depression makes you feel helpless, hopeless, and worthless



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yolo# said...
on Mar. 11 2013 at 3:44 am
they can write about what ever they want, but this poem is very inspiring and depression is something ive been through, and thhis pretty much makes sense to all of it. :)

on Oct. 3 2009 at 1:47 pm
s.nichole. PLATINUM, Ossian, Indiana
27 articles 4 photos 18 comments
and love? lets you know that you are.

i love this poem.

on Oct. 2 2009 at 3:19 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you for the comment :)

Meago GOLD said...
on Oct. 2 2009 at 2:57 pm
Meago GOLD, Spring City, Tennessee
17 articles 2 photos 83 comments

Favorite Quote:
How come when you need something the most- that's the time when you have to fight the hardest to receive it?

Very good descriptions! I love it!

on Oct. 2 2009 at 1:52 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Yeah, me too :)

on Oct. 2 2009 at 1:51 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you very much.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:27 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

Wow I love this poem. Awesome keep writing!

on Oct. 1 2009 at 12:11 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you very much. I've never been depressed, but I can imagine what it feels like.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:50 am
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

Excellent description. Very easy to relate too. Depression does indeed, sound like an empty silence.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 5:42 pm
AmandaLee143 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Believe :)

Ookk gotchaaa...

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:42 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you very much. I didn't know people would like my poem so much.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:41 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Sorry, I posted like the same thing twice!

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:40 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you so much! I love to write about emotions.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:39 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you so much! I love to write about emotions. You should read some of my other poems.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:36 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I'm not depressed! I just wrote a poem about depression.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 2:11 pm
AmandaLee143 SILVER, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
Always Believe :)

I liked this poem a lot. No one is happy 24/7 , its good to get it out :)

I do it all the time. :)

LunaMica said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 12:58 pm
Very nice! For me, it's hard to write about emotions, at least, write about them well. But you, did awesome.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 11:03 am
IF YOU WANT TO WRITE ABOUT AN EMOTION...WRITE ABOUT HAPPY OR EXCITED. GOSH DARNITT!!

on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:19 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I posted a poem about self esteem :)

on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:19 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I'm not depressed! I just wanted to write about an emotion.


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