Confusion

September 11, 2009
By Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.


Confusion is all the colors of the rainbow
It sounds like that mysterious creaking noise you can’t identify
It tastes like a sour cupcake or a sweet pickle
It smells like a strange stench wafting out from the trash can
It looks like a striped cheetah or a spotted tiger
Confusion makes you feel like you are falling into a jumble of thoughts



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on Oct. 2 2009 at 1:51 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

What do you mean?

boyda said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 5:41 pm
you're welcome, i commented for a school assignment

on Oct. 1 2009 at 4:46 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Wow, thank you so much!

boyda said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 4:12 pm
Nicely done! I liked when you said "sour cupcake or sweet pickle", that would be very confusing! When you said "strange stench wafting out from the trash can", I could almost smell it! Confusion is quite a strange sensation, and you have captured it well.

on Oct. 1 2009 at 12:12 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thanks for commenting :)

on Oct. 1 2009 at 11:51 am
kendraelysia SILVER, Turner, Maine
9 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"To risk nothing is to risk everything."

Awesome. Nicely done. I like the last bit about falling into a jumble of thoughts.

on Sep. 30 2009 at 4:24 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

Thank you. I tried to use some good descriptions.

LunaMica said...
on Sep. 30 2009 at 3:51 pm
I really like this one..for each poet, I think confusion is a bunch of different things. I like how you took your own things, and put them together.

on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:18 pm
Mandiella DIAMOND, Plaistow, New Hampshire
73 articles 58 photos 349 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't waste time. Start procrastinating now.

I wrote this because for English we had to write a poem about an emotion and use the senses to describe what that emotion is like. So I used similes to describe confusion, like how it is like a noise you cannot identify.

blob said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 3:10 pm
I thought this poem was really confusing but had a lot of similies. what is your reason for writing this?

on Sep. 29 2009 at 2:10 pm
We like all of your descriptions and similies. And you involed Your senses which made it easier to relate to confusion. Nice work :)

caandcb said...
on Sep. 29 2009 at 11:56 am
overall it was very well thought out and gave me a good idea of what confusion feels like.

on Sep. 29 2009 at 10:39 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

i love your descriptions


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