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They fight to the finish
Power, such a simple word

They are the wind
blowing so furiously
they can destroy towns,
they can destroy people

Living lies that can lure people into believing
Whay is that?

They understand
I know they have a plan for this land
They want us to follow the materialism

They... the liers
They... the conformists
They... the normal

The leaders have the power
They set normal on their terms

As I'm rejecting them,
my hand reaches the sky
Can't you see?
Don't you listen?

The pain in our eyes
The gawking cries
We can't believe we were deceived by those lies

Which is greater?
power to control
the power to listen and lead?

Have they decided?

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<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:09 am
amazing! i loved it. good work:D
choirchic said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 11:16 pm
this is really good. i love the last stanza. its says alot about our world
kendraelysia This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 11:55 am
This was fantastic. Very powerful, and very strong. Excellent. :)
Savina D. said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 8:12 pm
Thank you'll, this poem is talking about how government or certain people think they can control the weaker people
LunaMica said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 3:58 pm
:O I'm awestruck by how awesome this poem is! I don't understand much about it, but the way the words flow is amazing.
dylonmichael said...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 10:53 am
i love this poem
~blueroses~ replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 7:49 pm
i agree. it is an amazing poem, but im afraid i dont understand what it is truly about. the parts i understood, however were enough to make it great!! (:
dylonmichael replied...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 10:05 am
i agree with you
~blueroses~ replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 5:50 pm
why, thank you. :)
dylonmichael replied...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 8:23 am
welcome :)
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