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The Lucky One

He steps on the gas
His mind is unclear
The lines blur together
He shifts the gears

The colors all blend
While the speed is increased
The bottle is empty
The car moves without cease

He slams the brakes
The car jolts to the left
He’s crying and praying
To defy his own death

The sirens are close now
He screams I’m okay
As for the other car
It was a second too late

You’re the lucky one boy
The officer points out
How am I lucky
He is thinking, wanting to shout

That person is in heaven now
My decision ended her life
He didn’t know it then
But that person was his wife



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Stephanie F. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:15 pm:
the ending was soooooo sad
 
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<3::wish4wings::<3 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 10:16 am:
this is really good:D but the ending suprised me. lol sad
 
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