Let Them In

September 21, 2009
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Cry,girl,cry
let it all go
let is out
let them see you at your weakest
let them know you are not as strong as you look
let them realize you are losing faith
don't hide it
you've been doing that long enough
stop hiding behind your smile
they need to know you have pain too!
they care, they do
but you can't open up
no matter what you try
you don't let the tears fall
no matter how much you want to
you're hiding too much
knock those four walls down
let them in
and girl
just let yourself cry





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Uncle & Aunt said...
Nov. 14, 2009 at 8:34 pm
Nice poem. Shows depth of understanding. It is true, letting sad feelings out heals and helps us move on.
 
Farrahann replied...
Nov. 15, 2009 at 7:18 am
thank you =)
 
Sky said...
Oct. 20, 2009 at 10:04 pm
Love it. Keep writing.
 
gramps said...
Oct. 17, 2009 at 4:37 pm
nice poem, Farrah. I'm impressed!
 
Scott R said...
Oct. 16, 2009 at 8:54 pm
Wonderful Poem Farrah...So beautiful..
 
gatmel21 said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 11:41 am
Great poem - very touching and moving. Great job!
 
Farrahann replied...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 5:00 pm
thank you very much
 
marion said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 6:12 pm
Great Farrah. I am really impressed. You should write more.
 
rickard said...
Oct. 13, 2009 at 2:24 pm
A great poem! Sad, but powerful at the same time. Let us see more "Ink" from you in the future.
 
danjor said...
Oct. 10, 2009 at 9:28 pm
I aboslutley love this poem keep up the great work
 
Farrahann replied...
Oct. 12, 2009 at 6:13 am
thank you and i will try =)
 
Jenna B. said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 8:23 pm
WOW, so amazing and truthful my favorite kind
 
Farrahann replied...
Sept. 29, 2009 at 5:02 pm
thank you for the comment =)
 
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