You and Me

It's alright,
I'll just sit here tonight,
And wait for you to relize where you belong.

While you're out having fun,
There is somthing that needs to be done,
And its that you need to know you need me.

I'll give you patience and all my time,
And sit here on my bed and write this silly rhyme,
i cannot live without you.

You seem so happy without me,
But just think of what you and I could be,
I could be your everything.

Think it over and i'll give you your space,
But always remember no one could ever take your place,
i love you.





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bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 20, 2009 at 12:51 pm
No it doesn't sound like a five year old wrote it but it doesn't sound like the words came right from your heart and those are the best poems!
It's vry well written and is quite relatable
I think everyone feels this way about someone at one point or another.
I agree, writing totally helps! Once it's on paper it's no longer trapped in ur head! Writing always makes me feel better.
Keep up the good work! ;)
 
itsamazzinggrace This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Oct. 15, 2009 at 9:13 am
agreed with the girl below. very well done :)
 
Stephanie F. said...
Oct. 2, 2009 at 10:52 pm
it does not sound like a five year old wrote it. it was really good
 
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