All we can do

Being spontaneous,
Falling in love,
Risking pain,
Risking it all.

Sometimes the best thins hurt the worst,
And all we can do is live to love again.





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mimi2.0 said...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 5:31 pm
wow. its short yet states a deep point. i like it alot.
~mimi
 
Ren-P. replied...
Nov. 29, 2009 at 8:37 pm
Thanks Mimi!
(Wow. I just noticed that I forgot the "g" in the word "things." Sigh).
 
Girl-Writer replied...
Mar. 27, 2010 at 10:56 pm

*laughs quietly*

It's still a very good - and as Mimi pointed out - deep poem with the meaning skimming the surface. Spelling mistakes can be worried about by the editors. Keep up the good work.

 
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