We Don't Make a Team

September 19, 2009
By haileewrites SILVER, Clark, New Jersey
haileewrites SILVER, Clark, New Jersey
8 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I lost the game.


What I threaded,
You shredded,

What I released,
You decreased,

How come you don’t get it?

We don’t make a team,
Not even in a dream.

So take your head out of the clouds, it doesn’t belong there.
Take your hand out of mind, just make a prayer.

Silence.
One beat.
Two.

I’m sorry.
It’s selfish of me.

But pray for my well-being.
Now I’m leaving.

Who knows if I will return?

I want you, but it doesn’t do.

We don’t make a team,
But we do in my dreams.



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on Sep. 30 2009 at 8:00 am
haileewrites SILVER, Clark, New Jersey
8 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
I lost the game.

nope it's mind lolz. 2 show that the reader is telling the subject to stop fanatizing (sp?) lolz and to stop morphing thoughts. anyway, the reader and the subject hate eachother, but secretly, the reader is in love. yeah. thanx tho

on Sep. 30 2009 at 6:28 am
AubreyTRieder PLATINUM, Clark, New Jersey
29 articles 0 photos 85 comments
wow! this is awesome!!!!!!!! the only thing... is it supposed to be"take your hand out of mine?" lol don't worry if it is, though it's just a silly mistake

good job!


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