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Is What I'm Feeling Really Real?

September 19, 2009
By Amy-xo BRONZE, Auckland, Other
Amy-xo BRONZE, Auckland, Other
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She walked into the room

her scent filled the air...

Heads turned but she looked at the floor

scuffing her feet along the way.

She heard his voice

like her light in the darkness.

But, when she looked up

the light faded.

And she was left surrounded by people

but in complete isolation

The author's comments:
This piece was about the loss of some of my friends who changed who they were to "fit in" I felt like I was left all alone in a world where nobody cared anymore.

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on Oct. 10 2009 at 8:04 am
Zad Bacha BRONZE, Avezzano, Other
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I often feel that way too...good poem