Crashing down

September 18, 2009
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Crashing Down

That day was the day
I heard the sound
The cries that sent
My world crashing down.
As I watched T.V,
Smoke filled the air.
As tears filled my eyes,
I thought…
How could they not care?
The took our fathers,
Mother’s, sisters, and brothers.
Some of America’s greatest lovers
Some people lost a little, some people lost it all.
Pain filled my body,
As I watched the towers fall.
I met a little girl
Who lost her mother
Her only wish was to have
Said goodbye and that she loved her.
“9-11”I yell out loud,
The day my world came crashing down.

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EmmaXoxo<3 said...
Dec. 19, 2009 at 3:10 pm
I loved this, it is very sad but it shows the emotion and frustration everyone had!
Great job! Keep writing!
richardswifey said...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 10:56 am
this poem is true on many levels it made me cry. i loved it tho
Tamara replied...
Nov. 17, 2009 at 2:01 pm
thank you i appreciate that i wrote it for a school thing and read it inforn of 2,000 kids haha scary
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