I Don't Play Nice with Others

September 18, 2009
By HomeSickShadows99 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
HomeSickShadows99 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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This world is my own
It's mine to offer
for me and for mine
It's little and broken,
But I Sure don't mind
Because it's my own
A world just for me
A world with no rules
No laws, no worries
Only what you make
Or what you believe
Faith in yourself
Belief in you will
Throw your cares away
Watch it all pass by,
Close you eyes
And shout with pride,
"This world is my own!"


The author's comments:
Everyone wants to have their own little world everynow and again, so this is for whenever you feel that way.

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KuMaNgA said...
on Oct. 27 2009 at 12:49 pm
I wish i had my own world.. lol this poem is good

Ampersand GOLD said...
on Sep. 28 2009 at 3:09 pm
Ampersand GOLD, Mount Desert, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"RedVines! What the hell can't they do?"

I loved that!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 3:06 pm
LonelyGirl93 PLATINUM, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Imitation is suicide.

This is really deep. Keep up the good work and never give up poetry!Come check out my page and please leave comments.

on Sep. 27 2009 at 3:05 pm
LonelyGirl93 PLATINUM, Alexandria, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
Imitation is suicide.

I know the feeling!

on Sep. 27 2009 at 10:49 am
NessieMarie GOLD, Minonk, Illinois
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this is cute(:

on Sep. 27 2009 at 12:24 am
Caroline Williams GOLD, Scottsville, Kentucky
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love it! its really good.

the-optimist said...
on Sep. 26 2009 at 6:25 pm
the-optimist, Longview, Texas
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I loved it!

on Sep. 25 2009 at 9:14 pm
babymama888 SILVER, Shaker Heights, Ohio
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this is REALLY GOOD

on Sep. 25 2009 at 8:31 pm
accio-sarcasm, Nunya Effin Business, Other
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Favorite Quote:
"To the well organized man, death is but the next great adventure."
-Dumbledore, Harry Potter and the Sorcerer's Stone

"There's nothing wrong with you. There's just a lot wrong with the world you live in."
-Chris Colfer

love it. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.

on Sep. 25 2009 at 7:05 pm
Madisynyoung BRONZE, Boise, Idaho
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wow that was a deep poem it might not seem like that to some people but if you read it over and over it is deep

on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:58 pm
UndiscoveredSweets PLATINUM, Holly Springs, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
We keep moving forward, opening new doors and doing new things, because we're curious and curiosity keeps leading us down new paths- Walt Disney

Wow this is pretty awesome! it made me understand something :)

on Sep. 25 2009 at 4:55 pm
HomeSickShadows99 SILVER, Raleigh, North Carolina
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thx man XD

on Sep. 25 2009 at 10:30 am
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

OMG i love it i wish i could create my own world where love is easy to find and you wont get judge for being too fat, too thin, too dumb, or too gay etc.


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