I Don't Play Nice with Others

September 18, 2009
This world is my own
It's mine to offer
for me and for mine
It's little and broken,
But I Sure don't mind
Because it's my own
A world just for me
A world with no rules
No laws, no worries
Only what you make
Or what you believe
Faith in yourself
Belief in you will
Throw your cares away
Watch it all pass by,
Close you eyes
And shout with pride,
"This world is my own!"

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KuMaNgA said...
Oct. 27, 2009 at 12:49 pm
I wish i had my own world.. lol this poem is good
poemgirl55 said...
Sept. 28, 2009 at 3:09 pm
I loved that!
PTL1213 said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 3:06 pm
This is really deep. Keep up the good work and never give up poetry!Come check out my page and please leave comments.
NessieMarie said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 10:49 am
this is cute(:
Caroline W. said...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 12:24 am
love it! its really good.
the-optimist said...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 6:25 pm
I loved it!
Olivia W. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 9:14 pm
emily.louise said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 8:31 pm
love it. B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L.
UndiscoveredSweets said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 4:58 pm
Wow this is pretty awesome! it made me understand something :)
Madisyn Y. replied...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 7:05 pm
wow that was a deep poem it might not seem like that to some people but if you read it over and over it is deep
Jeremy C. said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 4:55 pm
thx man XD
dylonmichael said...
Sept. 25, 2009 at 10:30 am
OMG i love it i wish i could create my own world where love is easy to find and you wont get judge for being too fat, too thin, too dumb, or too gay etc.
PTL1213 replied...
Sept. 27, 2009 at 3:05 pm
I know the feeling!
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