August 6, 2009
You feel the ocean waves crash along your feet

the smell of the sea salt relaxes you.

the cool breeze push against you body,
Little baby steps towards the warm ocean waters.

You've stepped towards the beautiful wonders of the oceans sea.

You see shrimps, sea stars, squids, sponges, and sharks.

You surround the beauties of the world.

God blessed us for giving us the most magnificent world.

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jferragonio said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 7:38 pm
Jillian Ferragonio
Brooke Rimel
TeenInk.comment posting
poetry/free write
I think this poem is very creative. Like when the speaker said "the cool breeze push against your body." I felt that the speaker really made you feel it like you were at the beach. All around i felt that the speaker did a nice job writing this poem.
Dreamer123 replied...
Sept. 26, 2009 at 8:37 am
Thank you very much! God Bless all
Emoprairedog said...
Sept. 24, 2009 at 3:39 pm
i have one thing to say.... Amen.
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