Oceans

August 6, 2009
By Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
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You feel the ocean waves crash along your feet

the smell of the sea salt relaxes you.

the cool breeze push against you body,
Little baby steps towards the warm ocean waters.

You've stepped towards the beautiful wonders of the oceans sea.

You see shrimps, sea stars, squids, sponges, and sharks.

You surround the beauties of the world.

God blessed us for giving us the most magnificent world.



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on Sep. 26 2009 at 8:37 am
Dreamer123 SILVER, Oviedo, Florida
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Thank you very much! God Bless all

jferragonio said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 7:38 pm
Jillian Ferragonio

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poetry/free write

I think this poem is very creative. Like when the speaker said "the cool breeze push against your body." I felt that the speaker really made you feel it like you were at the beach. All around i felt that the speaker did a nice job writing this poem.

on Sep. 24 2009 at 3:39 pm
Emoprairedog BRONZE, Cary, North Carolina
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i have one thing to say.... Amen.




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