Like a Puzzle

August 7, 2009
By ryerye626 PLATINUM, Port Washington, Wisconsin
ryerye626 PLATINUM, Port Washington, Wisconsin
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closely, carefully, calmly caressing.
His hands on my skin, slowly undressing.
We fit together, like we were never apart.
No longer can I control the beat of my heart.
The heat of our passion, steam in the air
No other pleasure could ever compare.



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on Sep. 25 2009 at 2:01 pm
harrisonford92 BRONZE, Watertown, Massachusetts
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this is beautiful! so simple but so detailed...i really like it

dezzyg123 said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 10:51 pm
This is an AMAZING piece of work!

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 10:15 pm
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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nice poem i like it alot

halls said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 7:02 pm
I absolutely love the way the poet describes how their relationship to a puzzle. If you think of the puzzle, and how you put it together, you will find you put it together, "closely, carefully, calmly."in the first line. Also in the last line it states, "No other pleasure cold ever compare." which is like saying, how no puzzle piece can compare or be the same.


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