Why should i ?

September 16, 2009
By KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
10 articles 10 photos 30 comments

Around,around

each other we go
When this ends we don't know

But I'll stop here and now

I'm tired of us

this game we play

circling each other


never meeting


never seeing

if we can be more

for we are afraid



why? why?


you say


because


we are to young


to jaded

to try to make it work

for we have eyes


we can see

the would if full

of empty promise
and unfullfilled dreams
as people use the means of other

to be greater

then say see you later

and move on to another
can't you hear our plea
We don't want to be
just another casualty

of this game called


Love


The author's comments:
i just wrote this looking back on all the years i waited before i dated this guy who was my friend and still his though we not so close anymore

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KLD1992 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:28 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
10 articles 10 photos 30 comments
thank you i'm glad you found the message in the poem

KLD1992 GOLD said...
on Sep. 24 2009 at 6:26 pm
KLD1992 GOLD, Bradford, Massachusetts
10 articles 10 photos 30 comments
thank you i hope many people can connect to what i'm writing

on Sep. 22 2009 at 2:26 pm
keyboard_musican SILVER, Springfield, Illinois
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i love this i can really connect and what ur writing is true.

on Sep. 21 2009 at 11:38 pm
a-head-full-of-words GOLD, Hollywood, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“He must increase, but I must decrease.”- John 3:30

i like this...the message is so true!! XD




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