September 16, 2009
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Live for the one you love
Love for the one you live for
When death came a knocking I opened the door
At first I wondered what to do
Thought it over
Thought of you
Took the wrong path wish I could go back
But now I cant
What’s wrong with that?
The hands of death killed me inside
But yet I’m still here
Yet I’m still alive
Thoughts of you brought me through
Its not so bad because of you
I love you so
Please don’t go.
I lost you once; and didn’t let it show
Retraced my steps
Saw the light of the sky-the ocean was crashing
Tell me who am I?
Woke up screaming
Cant believe my eyes you were there
By the light of the sky

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1_am_wh0 said...
Nov. 15, 2010 at 6:22 pm
I'm speechless. This seems to be my experience with life enbodied in words. Thank you for commenting on my work, and keep writing.
Hilary L. said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 10:20 am
Very well written and orignal. I love it!!
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