You Don't Notice

September 16, 2009
By Anonymous

My sorrowful soul dies for you
My teary eyes cry for you
My weakened lungs sigh for you
But you don't notice
My broken heart aches for you
My shaking hands pray for you
My dying love waits for you
But you don't notice
My wavering voice callsto you
My trembling body crawls to you
My knees shake and they fall to you
But you don't notice
You don't watch me die for you
You don't see me cry for you
You don't hear me sigh for you
No, you don't notice a thing
You don't know I ache for you
You don't see me pray for you
You can't tell I wait for you
No, you don't notice a thing
You don't listen to me call to you
You don't see me when I crawl to you
You don't know it when I fall to you
No, you don't notice a thing
Because ever since the day you died
You don't notice my pain inside


The author's comments:
This was not inspired by a relationship that I went through. I just came up with it on my own.

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on Nov. 24 2009 at 4:19 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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this is so good. *clicks favorites* four thumbs up girl.

on Sep. 23 2009 at 5:08 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!

on Sep. 23 2009 at 5:08 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Thanks so much! I'm kind of new at writing poetry (I mostly do novels), so it's awesome to know that people like my poetry!

on Sep. 22 2009 at 11:57 am
completely_content GOLD, Reno, Nevada
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I think, therfore i am

i really like this one alot

on Sep. 22 2009 at 11:20 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is good!


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