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You Don't Notice

By , Chicago, IL
My sorrowful soul dies for you
My teary eyes cry for you
My weakened lungs sigh for you
But you don't notice
My broken heart aches for you
My shaking hands pray for you
My dying love waits for you
But you don't notice
My wavering voice callsto you
My trembling body crawls to you
My knees shake and they fall to you
But you don't notice
You don't watch me die for you
You don't see me cry for you
You don't hear me sigh for you
No, you don't notice a thing
You don't know I ache for you
You don't see me pray for you
You can't tell I wait for you
No, you don't notice a thing
You don't listen to me call to you
You don't see me when I crawl to you
You don't know it when I fall to you
No, you don't notice a thing
Because ever since the day you died
You don't notice my pain inside



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Joyce R. said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 11:57 am
i really like this one alot
 
Lexi L. replied...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 5:08 pm
Thanks so much! I'm kind of new at writing poetry (I mostly do novels), so it's awesome to know that people like my poetry!
 
heaven said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 11:20 am
this is good!
 
Lexi L. replied...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 5:08 pm
Thank you! I'm so glad you liked it!
 
~*el-oh-vee-ee*~ replied...
Nov. 24, 2009 at 4:19 pm
this is so good. *clicks favorites* four thumbs up girl.
 
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