With Beauty Such Divine

September 15, 2009
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In all my life I've never seen
Beauty such divine as thee
Your heart, your soul
Are rich as gold
How I long for thee
One so graceful, kind, and loving
How I long for thee
One so smart, trusting and carefree
Wise beyond your every year
How you overcome your every fear
How I wish I was that free
With beauty such divine as thee
But it will never be

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mrsabbyjonas13 said...
Jan. 3, 2010 at 2:54 pm
Wow. This is one of those poems that's like a breath of fresh air, because I totally feel the same way. I guiltily agree that this is so relateable because I feel this way myself sometimes. But you are SO right, it can never be, I am my own person and I have to make the best of that. This is a beautiful piece; keep up your great work! Also, if you get a chance, I posted some new stuff that needs critiquing, big time. Comment on them with your input if you can! :D
Nicovera said...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 6:26 am
This is so true! I love the writing style
Nick-M replied...
Dec. 16, 2009 at 6:31 pm
Thanks for reading my work Nicovera, I'll check out some of yours too :)
Natie said...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 3:34 pm
This poem is ..WOW..Speechless.I'm starting to enjoy your writing:)
NickMa replied...
Oct. 1, 2009 at 10:19 pm
Aww thanks. I'm working on a few more.
afatgirlscry said...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 6:04 am
nice. you have a very good point.
Nick M. replied...
Sept. 23, 2009 at 8:34 am
Thank you :)
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