With Beauty Such Divine

September 15, 2009
By Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-


Oh
In all my life I've never seen
Beauty such divine as thee
Oh
Your heart, your soul
Are rich as gold
Oh
How I long for thee
One so graceful, kind, and loving
Oh
How I long for thee
One so smart, trusting and carefree
Oh
Wise beyond your every year
How you overcome your every fear
Oh
How I wish I was that free
With beauty such divine as thee
Oh
But it will never be


The author's comments:
What inspired me is I saw all these girls talking about how they want to be just like some celebrity and I thought why can't they just be happy with themselves. So I basically want people to know that no matter how much they want to be someone else
"it will never be"

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on Jan. 3 2010 at 2:54 pm
fearlessalways13 SILVER, N/A, New Hampshire
7 articles 6 photos 46 comments
Wow. This is one of those poems that's like a breath of fresh air, because I totally feel the same way. I guiltily agree that this is so relateable because I feel this way myself sometimes. But you are SO right, it can never be, I am my own person and I have to make the best of that. This is a beautiful piece; keep up your great work! Also, if you get a chance, I posted some new stuff that needs critiquing, big time. Comment on them with your input if you can! :D

Nick-M SILVER said...
on Dec. 16 2009 at 6:31 pm
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-

Thanks for reading my work Nicovera, I'll check out some of yours too :)

on Dec. 16 2009 at 6:26 am
Arluanna PLATINUM, Broken Arrow, Oklahoma
31 articles 2 photos 99 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Mwahahahahaha! Now you are mine, Lesley-Bird, finally, at last, in my... oh, drat, forgot it had wings...”

-Phil, the youngest Kalins Uzin

This is so true! I love the writing style

Nick-M SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 10:19 pm
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-

Aww thanks. I'm working on a few more.

Natie SILVER said...
on Oct. 1 2009 at 3:34 pm
Natie SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
6 articles 0 photos 55 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Struggle as hard as you can for whatever you believe in" -ahaha thats from a Fortune Cookie :D

This poem is ..WOW..Speechless.I'm starting to enjoy your writing:)

-Natie

Nick-M SILVER said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 8:34 am
Nick-M SILVER, Oak Park, Illinois
9 articles 0 photos 49 comments

Favorite Quote:
-FLTDO-

Thank you :)

afatgirlscry said...
on Sep. 23 2009 at 6:04 am
nice. you have a very good point.


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