Orange Moon

September 10, 2009
By razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
2 articles 1 photo 20 comments

My Mind is Free
As i opened the Book
It swept Me away
from everywhere i looked
I arrIved in this world
Wit an OrAnge MoOn
Whose sky was Always
changin like growin Doom
The birds were all green
Like they Ate toO mucH
Brocolli
iT seemed...
There were no words to express
cause when i open my mouTh
NOthing tumbled out
like i had forgotton the taste of
the Alphabet
I looked around for the first time
and realized that i Am lyin
on the Ground
I rise slowly watchin the streaks
of light dancing around
Like they did Not want to b
FOund
My eyes shine like
i swallowed a Light buLb
Brighter than the one's in
the NYCity subs
A strange woman walks past and doesn't happen to see ME.. on the
sideWalk lOokin as confused as cAn
B
The winD caRried her scent on
its shoulders right to my nose
It was a mixture of tomatoes
& pinecones a smell i would rather
Not
have known
Her shape was like a coke bOttle
Her hair was long and Her sKin
lOoKed like an artist's canVas
thAt should never hav been Shown
She waLked inTo the horizon and
Never came BaCk again...
I should have fOllowed her...
ImAgine the adventure
it would have Been...!

The author's comments:
This came to me one random night
when sleep would not catch my eye...enjoy i would love feed back?

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cheyb88 SILVER said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 9:48 pm
cheyb88 SILVER, Saint Joseph, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
The lunatic, the lover, the poet, are of imagination of all compact. -William Shakespeare

So don't worry, because I am with you. Don't be afraid, because I am your God. I will make you strong and will help you. I will support you with my right hand that saves you.
Isaiah 41:10

"Expectation is the root of all headaches"- William Shakespeare

"Here take my Elmo" -Chloe'

“If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it doesn’t, then it was never meant to be.”

lol yep love it hey check out my work sometime lol

Jenny said...
on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:27 pm
Well, it's very similar! :) Keep on writing!

on Sep. 22 2009 at 4:55 pm
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

Lol, I <3 strange too.

on Sep. 22 2009 at 3:51 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
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i ♥ strange loldz

on Sep. 22 2009 at 3:51 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
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gold star really bless u ♥

on Sep. 22 2009 at 3:45 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
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sure thanks cheackin now...♥

on Sep. 22 2009 at 3:45 pm
razorzRpainful BRONZE, Pennsauken, New Jersey
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the weird and tad embarrasin thing is that i have never even heard of this e e man lol but no itz not♥ thanks

Jenny said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 7:17 pm
Very nice peom! I'm wondering. Is this inspired by e.e. cummings? The style is quite similar!

cheyb88 SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:42 pm
cheyb88 SILVER, Saint Joseph, Missouri
5 articles 54 photos 80 comments

Favorite Quote:
The lunatic, the lover, the poet, are of imagination of all compact. -William Shakespeare

So don't worry, because I am with you. Don't be afraid, because I am your God. I will make you strong and will help you. I will support you with my right hand that saves you.
Isaiah 41:10

"Expectation is the root of all headaches"- William Shakespeare

"Here take my Elmo" -Chloe'

“If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it doesn’t, then it was never meant to be.”

Very good! Very unique love it! Gold Star!

Schubster said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 6:23 pm
Very different, but a good kind of different. haha, i always write my poems late at night, like, usually one in the morning :) keep writing great stuff!!!

check out my work?

on Sep. 18 2009 at 9:23 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
14 articles 0 photos 279 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

A little strange, but very good.


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