Painful Love

September 8, 2009
By Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17


Space and time I've found now for just about two years
Trying everyday of every month to forget with loving tears
Cause if the truth be told I know you want be coming back to me
Seems someone else's hand you have found that sets you free

And I should feel happy for you and be the bigger man
But how can I when even now I love you with everything that I am
I've tried to forget you and find a new life to begin
And when all else falled I even tried to be your friend

So now I'm left with what seems like no way to know
If I'll ever get the chance again to watch are true love grow
I miss you so much it's almost impossible to say
That no matter what I'll always love you forever and a day

So now time comes at us as though without any limits
Knowing no bounds and racing through every minute
And if I have merely one more time to show how true
Are love could be if I had only one more chance to love you


The author's comments:
`ahhhh whatever

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on Jun. 8 2010 at 4:45 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

im srry to hear that

Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 4:41 pm
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

i'm afraid this poem is all thats left of that.

its ok though, things heal, people forget. that sort of stuff


on Sep. 21 2009 at 12:56 pm
Hannah523 SILVER, Winterport, Maine
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I know how you feel. Very nice work :)

on Sep. 20 2009 at 4:14 pm
eternal*sunshine SILVER, Seabrook, Texas
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Great work! I definitely know the feeling, and believe me some days it does suck horribly, but it does get better. Keep up the good work!

Ruberz GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 4:04 pm
Ruberz GOLD, Dearborn, Michigan
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Beautiful. Very touching!

Riita BRONZE said...
on Sep. 20 2009 at 1:23 pm
Riita BRONZE, Newark, New Jersey
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awsomee ;]

on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:53 pm
x.kelly.x BRONZE, Wherethewildthingsare., Other
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Only one word.. ''amazing''. (:

Annika GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:47 am
Annika GOLD, SIOUX FALLS, South Dakota
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nice! show her your love but dont push her to see it. youll only push her away.

Schubster said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 6:26 pm
great job!! :) it attacks a trite subject with a different angle. keep up the good work

check out my work???

on Sep. 18 2009 at 2:43 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
10 articles 3 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

I love it keep up the good work and you should try and get her back shes sound like the one

Breee GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 12:20 pm
Breee GOLD, Salina, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
"If you really love someone, you shouldnt have to work at it."
-Vanessa Hudgens

oh my god. i love it! it made me think of the poem i wrote just not so lengthy.. Hun if i were you i would try to get her back. You love her! :))

on Sep. 18 2009 at 11:41 am
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is tuely good.. good work.:)




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