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Space and time I've found now for just about two years
Trying everyday of every month to forget with loving tears
Cause if the truth be told I know you want be coming back to me
Seems someone else's hand you have found that sets you free

And I should feel happy for you and be the bigger man
But how can I when even now I love you with everything that I am
I've tried to forget you and find a new life to begin
And when all else falled I even tried to be your friend

So now I'm left with what seems like no way to know
If I'll ever get the chance again to watch are true love grow
I miss you so much it's almost impossible to say
That no matter what I'll always love you forever and a day

So now time comes at us as though without any limits
Knowing no bounds and racing through every minute
And if I have merely one more time to show how true
Are love could be if I had only one more chance to love you



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Hannah523 said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 12:56 pm
I know how you feel. Very nice work :)
 
eternal*sunshine said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 4:14 pm
Great work! I definitely know the feeling, and believe me some days it does suck horribly, but it does get better. Keep up the good work!
 
Ruba B. said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 4:04 pm
Beautiful. Very touching!
 
Riita said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 1:23 pm
awsomee ;]
 
Kellyy S. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 7:53 pm
Only one word.. ''amazing''. (:
 
Annika said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 7:47 am
nice! show her your love but dont push her to see it. youll only push her away.
 
Schubster said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 6:26 pm
great job!! :) it attacks a trite subject with a different angle. keep up the good work
check out my work???
 
dylonmichael said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 2:43 pm
I love it keep up the good work and you should try and get her back shes sound like the one
 
Mr.Trex replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 4:41 pm

i'm afraid this poem is all thats left of that.

its ok though, things heal, people forget. that sort of stuff

 
dylonmichael replied...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 4:45 pm
im srry to hear that
 
Breanna P. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 12:20 pm
oh my god. i love it! it made me think of the poem i wrote just not so lengthy.. Hun if i were you i would try to get her back. You love her! :))
 
heaven said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 11:41 am
this is tuely good.. good work.:)
 
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