Sunday with the Family MAG

September 17, 2009
By Benjamin Bordelon BRONZE, Mandeville, Louisiana
Benjamin Bordelon BRONZE, Mandeville, Louisiana
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Uncle Ryan drinks his coffee.
Aunt Sherri smells of soap.
Cousin Joshua chews his bubblegum.
Gigi tries to cope.

My mother turns red laughing.
Alex tries to please.
Alan snaps his photos.
Nick tinkers on his keys.

George watches football.
Justin stuffs his face.
Trixie often barks.
Abby wears her lace.

Dinner with the clan.
Kisses good-bye on the cheek.
Although we hate to go our ways,
We’ll do it again next week!



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on Jun. 25 2013 at 2:18 pm
beautifulspirit PLATINUM, Alpharetta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
The future belongs to those who believe in the beauty of their dreams.
--Eleanor Roosevelt

So cute sounds like Sundays with my own family! Great job--- it had me smiling and remembering:)

on Oct. 14 2012 at 2:24 pm
lizzyw77 BRONZE, Wayland, Massachusetts
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I love the rhyming and the repetition of this poem! Check out my stuff if you can :)

Ampersand GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 6:17 am
Ampersand GOLD, Mount Desert, Maine
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Favorite Quote:
"RedVines! What the hell can't they do?"

That was so cool! I liked the way it was written; so rythmically and bouncy. It was great.

Lillian GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 4:45 pm
Lillian GOLD, Pittsfield, Massachusetts
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"Gigi tries to cope."

Hmm..an interesting way to end the first verse! I love this poem.

Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Sep. 18 2009 at 3:25 am
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

thats really cool

jmc.13 said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 5:32 pm
jmc.13, Dobbs Ferry, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather regret what I did than what I didn't do."

Great! Loved the purposeful stanza formatting and subtle rhymes! Really good!

on Sep. 17 2009 at 12:27 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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this is really cute. good work!!


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