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Simple joy i seem to find watching as the world burns
Death and destruction are merely a bit of what i urn
Give me life and and i'll show the world how funny it can be
Slipping so far from this reality until you lose your mentality

Chaos is the begining and soon i become the ending
Stopping all that is good in life until bad starts winning
Grasp a sturdy rail for soon i'll lose control of my mind
Falling from existence until complete evils what you find

Don't look for the answer to what drove us this way
Just lose all ambitions and give in to what i say
Frown if you must but realize i am the saint
Sent for all to streak behind as i glicen like the paint

Leave your heart for it leaves you helpless to decide
Which way to turn until "deadendings" where you arrive
So leap if you feel you carry enough control
But don't sell yourself short enough to not sell me your soul




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xXsmileXx This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 20, 2009 at 11:04 am:
oooh, I love this!!! Its dark and ugh i can't even describe it! Way to go! Keep writing
 
Mr.Trex replied...
Jun. 11, 2010 at 9:25 am :

thanks, i really appreciate the comments. i hope to produce a book sometime in the future ;)

 

 
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xxJustxxMe This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 1:41 pm:
incredible
 
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Annika said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 7:50 am:
sweetness. that is awesome! your work is really good.
 
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Mr.Trex said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:14 pm:
sorry everyone i wrote this kind of quick. it should be yearn,beginning, and finally glisten. hope the poem still keeps its level of intensity
 
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Joyce said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 9:11 pm:
I love it.
 
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<3$~DarkAngel~$<3 said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 7:01 pm:
this is powerfull it expresses so much!
 
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holly_holly said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 6:28 pm:
this is a really good piece, it stays with the whole creepy theme, i like it
 
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Dokidoki-rin This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:50 am:
This is pretty cool- the images it creates are powerful. I'd just tweak the spelling a bit to keep the flow. sometimes it's easier to fully take in/understand the work that way. :D
 
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Ciara C. said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 10:55 am:
this is amazing...it's totally beliveable...
 
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