The Dark Prince

September 8, 2009
By Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17


Simple joy i seem to find watching as the world burns
Death and destruction are merely a bit of what i urn
Give me life and and i'll show the world how funny it can be
Slipping so far from this reality until you lose your mentality

Chaos is the begining and soon i become the ending
Stopping all that is good in life until bad starts winning
Grasp a sturdy rail for soon i'll lose control of my mind
Falling from existence until complete evils what you find

Don't look for the answer to what drove us this way
Just lose all ambitions and give in to what i say
Frown if you must but realize i am the saint
Sent for all to streak behind as i glicen like the paint

Leave your heart for it leaves you helpless to decide
Which way to turn until "deadendings" where you arrive
So leap if you feel you carry enough control
But don't sell yourself short enough to not sell me your soul



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Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Jun. 11 2010 at 9:25 am
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

thanks, i really appreciate the comments. i hope to produce a book sometime in the future ;)

 


on Sep. 20 2009 at 11:04 am
xXsmileXx PLATINUM, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Your dreams only become intangible when you stop reaching" ~me ;)

oooh, I love this!!! Its dark and ugh i can't even describe it! Way to go! Keep writing

on Sep. 19 2009 at 1:41 pm
ImDumbStruck DIAMOND, Springfield, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, destroy any evidence."

incredible

Annika GOLD said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 7:50 am
Annika GOLD, SIOUX FALLS, South Dakota
16 articles 0 photos 24 comments
sweetness. that is awesome! your work is really good.

Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:14 pm
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

sorry everyone i wrote this kind of quick. it should be yearn,beginning, and finally glisten. hope the poem still keeps its level of intensity

Joyce said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 9:11 pm
I love it.

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:01 pm
EternityBroken GOLD, Hooker, Oklahoma
17 articles 2 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
It is impossible to love and be wise.

this is powerfull it expresses so much!

on Sep. 17 2009 at 6:28 pm
Christalina_Stuart SILVER, Parkesburg, Pennsylvania
9 articles 0 photos 11 comments

Favorite Quote:
snap to!

this is a really good piece, it stays with the whole creepy theme, i like it

on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:50 am
Dokidoki-rin GOLD, Clarence, New York
14 articles 6 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
Whattaya gonna do, ya know?

This is pretty cool- the images it creates are powerful. I'd just tweak the spelling a bit to keep the flow. sometimes it's easier to fully take in/understand the work that way. :D

on Sep. 17 2009 at 10:55 am
emo.poptart. SILVER, Halethorpe, Maryland
5 articles 14 photos 17 comments

Favorite Quote:
"if u aren't wierd ur normal, if ur normal ur boring, if ur wierd ur fascinating and the world is urs lol "
-Fredwardness

this is amazing...it's totally beliveable...




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