Black Veil

September 7, 2009
By Cow94 GOLD, Salmiya, Other
Cow94 GOLD, Salmiya, Other
16 articles 3 photos 17 comments

A veil of darkness,
A journey of light,
Shattered, splattered,
Broken out of the night.

Insanely underestimated,
Unchained, unknown through this,
Fighting out, trying to shout,
A veil on her face.

Speak out onto me,
Take over me,
Dry my eyes, bond the ties,
Wonder through the gates of Hell.

Innocent, mild and guilty,
A rose through the scrap,
Strong, yet not wrong,
Guilty gone again for the past.

Burn inside,
The veil has been thrown again,
Long gone, breaking the dawn,
You're the one to be drowned.



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xd_3_7 BRONZE said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 8:55 pm
xd_3_7 BRONZE, New Market, Alabama
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I love this poem.

Its so dark and deep.

Keep up the good work

on Sep. 17 2009 at 12:58 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

LOVED IT keep up the good work

Cow94 GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:59 am
Cow94 GOLD, Salmiya, Other
16 articles 3 photos 17 comments
Thank you so much! =)

Nicky SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:24 am
Nicky SILVER, Sturgeon Falls, Other
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WOW this is a great poem :D I really like it

Cow94 GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:12 am
Cow94 GOLD, Salmiya, Other
16 articles 3 photos 17 comments
OMG! I can't even believe I got such nice comments.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you all liked it. =)

on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:06 am
emo.poptart. SILVER, Halethorpe, Maryland
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Favorite Quote:
"if u aren't wierd ur normal, if ur normal ur boring, if ur wierd ur fascinating and the world is urs lol "
-Fredwardness

i can't even put into words how AMAZING this is...can't wait to read more of your writing =)

on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:26 pm
ctrisha3 SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Greeat poem! You have some great images, loved it!

on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:27 pm
(=amanda=) GOLD, Somerset, Ohio
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love the word choice, i can really feel the emotion put into this poem =)

Cecilia said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 3:50 pm
Cecilia, Ocala, Florida
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This poem has so much emotion. Its great iI love it!!!!

anonymous said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:27 am
wow. man this is so realalistic! i want you to keep writing. this is so googd i can't even say what i feel. keep writing!!! 8-)


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