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A veil of darkness,
A journey of light,
Shattered, splattered,
Broken out of the night.

Insanely underestimated,
Unchained, unknown through this,
Fighting out, trying to shout,
A veil on her face.

Speak out onto me,
Take over me,
Dry my eyes, bond the ties,
Wonder through the gates of Hell.

Innocent, mild and guilty,
A rose through the scrap,
Strong, yet not wrong,
Guilty gone again for the past.

Burn inside,
The veil has been thrown again,
Long gone, breaking the dawn,
You're the one to be drowned.



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Megan S. said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 8:55 pm:
I love this poem.
Its so dark and deep.
Keep up the good work
 
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dylonmichael said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 12:58 pm:
LOVED IT keep up the good work
 
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Nicky said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:24 am:
WOW this is a great poem :D I really like it
 
Muntaha replied...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:59 am :
Thank you so much! =)
 
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Muntaha said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:12 am:
OMG! I can't even believe I got such nice comments.
Thank you so much. I'm glad you all liked it. =)
 
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Ciara C. said...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:06 am:
i can't even put into words how AMAZING this is...can't wait to read more of your writing =)
 
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ctrisha3This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 10:26 pm:
Greeat poem! You have some great images, loved it!
 
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(=amanda=) said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 5:27 pm:
love the word choice, i can really feel the emotion put into this poem =)
 
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Cecilia L. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 3:50 pm:
This poem has so much emotion. Its great iI love it!!!!
 
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anonymous said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 10:27 am:
wow. man this is so realalistic! i want you to keep writing. this is so googd i can't even say what i feel. keep writing!!! 8-)
 
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