Reach out

September 7, 2009
By Syahirah BRONZE, Melaka, Other
Syahirah BRONZE, Melaka, Other
2 articles 51 photos 28 comments

Reach out to the star
Touch me a the peak
Come with me
Towards the shiny star

Well, I will
I will bring you down
To meet the world
To meet the future

Free fall
Falling fast everything
To the deepest
To the darkest

Until to core
Something occurs
With the curiosity
The adventure continue

Both of them get trough all together
The magic begins together
With softness and hardness
Trough the unthinkable

We never turn back
But find the right
The purest way to being us
Surround by the one

As they are winning
There is one challenge
With trust, faith and believe
They made it

Until the end
We walk with the same step
The same word
The same time

We run
We chase
We fight
The highest of all

When both of them reach
Where they found
The unbeatable point
The highest of all

They wish to be at home
Home sweet home
With their love ones waiting
With each of them are together


The author's comments:
It's not only me who wrote this poem but me and my friend together.

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on Sep. 19 2009 at 6:15 am
Kumanga DIAMOND, Bethel, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
Always Accept nd love urself for who u are!

This is really good! Nice Job!!

on Sep. 17 2009 at 5:49 pm
Syahirah BRONZE, Melaka, Other
2 articles 51 photos 28 comments
Thank you for the comments.

There is a typing error in stanza 1 line 2. It it suppose to be 'Touch me at the peak' not 'Touch me a the peak'.

on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:29 pm
ctrisha3 SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Awesome poem, so very very real!

on Sep. 16 2009 at 11:29 am
Ren-P. PLATINUM, Tulsa, Oklahoma
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Favorite Quote:
"You must give up a life you’d planned in order to have the life that’s waiting for you." ~ Joseph Campbell

This is such good writing, and so relatable. Keep writing!

anonymous said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:30 am
i'm shocked that no one else has posted anything. i can relate to this. i'm always running trying to reach the sky. you're good don't stop wriitng!! :)




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