I care

September 7, 2009
By Anonymous

I care.
All you say is why?
Why?
Why do I care?
Because our stories are the same
You will never know
I can’t open up to you
I can’t shatter the allusion
You would never believe me
How could I have been through so much horror and look so innocent in your eyes
A façade.
That’s how
It works
I can keep it up easily
This was once me through and through
Not anymore.
I’m just as broken as you are
I never had someone to care
They all thought I was just messed up
I want you to know I care
I care!



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on Oct. 12 2009 at 6:01 pm
It is, it really is! Check out some of my work if you get a chance :]

AnneW SILVER said...
on Oct. 12 2009 at 1:42 am
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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Thank you! I was hoping that the emotions would be crystal clear and how they go from one to the next.

on Sep. 20 2009 at 9:38 am
bubblylittledancer PLATINUM, Waterloo, Iowa
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I love this poem, the title draws me in and the way your words go from one emotion to another is really great!

AnneW SILVER said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:24 pm
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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Thank you for reading and commenting! I'm glad so many of you can relate to my poem

on Sep. 17 2009 at 1:07 pm
dylonmichael GOLD, El Dorado, Kansas
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Favorite Quote:
i have two one is "live life as if it were your last day on earth" and two is "never make some one your everything because when they leave you you have nothing"

I love this poem and the best part is i can relate

GageKing GOLD said...
on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:03 am
GageKing GOLD, Owatonna, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
"The only way to find true happiness is to risk being completely cut open. Sure, everybody wants to play God, but for me it's a full-time job. What you don't understand, you can make mean anything." Jeferree Star

I really relate to this poem its really good

on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:42 pm
(=amanda=) GOLD, Somerset, Ohio
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i really like this =) i totally relate to it

AnneW SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:29 pm
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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Thank you!

AnneW SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:28 pm
AnneW SILVER, Santa Clara, California
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Thanks!

I do have one other up, check it out!

Cecilia said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:23 pm
Cecilia, Ocala, Florida
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This is a good poem. you should write more.

on Sep. 16 2009 at 4:53 pm
lovinglyftist BRONZE, Randolph, Massachusetts
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now, I like this


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