Satan in Love (With an Angel) MAG

September 6, 2009
By Wishing2much PLATINUM, Opelousas, Louisiana
Wishing2much PLATINUM, Opelousas, Louisiana
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Favorite Quote:
'There is no wisdom without love' -N. Sri Ram


As if the fires of hell
weren't hot enough, he turns the dial farther.
Seeking to impress her, they might say.

He hears her heavy heart beating
Imagines her golden hair flowing

She would break all the rules for him.
She'd sit on a melted coal and giggle
as he'd carefully pull her feathers.

What he wouldn't give to
touch her livid skin,
to feel the frozen blood heat up
and circulate within the touch of his hand.

If only she would fall from her cloud,
bend her halo, and give up her golden act.

He'd say he's in love.



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on Nov. 18 2014 at 6:42 pm
BeautyWhispers PLATINUM, Nevada City, California
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Favorite Quote:
Be Yourself, Be Unique, Be Me. :) - By BeautyWhispers

I really love this! It's very well written and great job getting on the teen ink magazine! :)

on Aug. 16 2010 at 1:34 pm
HannahS. SILVER, Fort Collins, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"Poetry is meant to be read aloud"
I can't remember where I read this but it is the truth of the matter.

This is beautiful. I enjoyed it greatly.

on Feb. 5 2010 at 5:08 pm
Acalleq PLATINUM, Togiak, Alaska
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Favorite Quote:
you never know how strong you are until being strong is the only choice you have

so beautifully written. the flow was perfect! hope she falls.

on Feb. 5 2010 at 2:31 pm
jesusluvsus BRONZE, Benton, Arkansas
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Favorite Quote:
The Bible

I love that!!!

on Feb. 5 2010 at 11:35 am
FlamingTaco1479 SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, hold onto them. They're free lemons!"

I absolutely love this. Beautiful work.

emi-chan GOLD said...
on Feb. 2 2010 at 6:54 pm
emi-chan GOLD, Brownsville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
the world ended when you said nothing

it's ssooo awesome may she fall JK

on Jan. 28 2010 at 2:24 pm
Jennifer Christensen BRONZE, Blackstone, Massachusetts
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my favorite poem from u :)

I always seem to be in a situation where I want what i can't have and i think thats the situation a lot of people find themselves in, good job :)

on Jan. 28 2010 at 1:04 pm
lemonygirl97 BRONZE, Fort Hunter, New York
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Very, very nice. I love the imagery and the passion in this poem, nice work.

on Jan. 27 2010 at 8:41 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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awwww so awesome!

on Jan. 27 2010 at 9:51 am
annkaykay2011 DIAMOND, Lansing, Michigan
75 articles 11 photos 137 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I am who I am, sorry, no changes."

This is beautiful.

on Jan. 26 2010 at 4:16 pm
talia_is_happy GOLD, Amarillo, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who mind- don't matter, and the people who matter- don't mind."
-Dr. Seuss

That was really good! Check out some of my writing?

Desanyx SILVER said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 5:30 pm
Desanyx SILVER, Westfield, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
The imagination is man's power over nature. -Wallace Stevens

Very nice poetry, you are one of the better poets on this website, well done.


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