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Satan in Love (With an Angel) This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine.

As if the fires of hell
weren't hot enough, he turns the dial farther.
Seeking to impress her, they might say.

He hears her heavy heart beating
Imagines her golden hair flowing

She would break all the rules for him.
She'd sit on a melted coal and giggle
as he'd carefully pull her feathers.

What he wouldn't give to
touch her livid skin,
to feel the frozen blood heat up
and circulate within the touch of his hand.

If only she would fall from her cloud,
bend her halo, and give up her golden act.

He'd say he's in love.

This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. This piece has been published in Teen Ink’s monthly print magazine.




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PercyBaumThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Nov. 18 at 6:42 pm
I really love this! It's very well written and great job getting on the teen ink magazine! :)
 
HannahS. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 16, 2010 at 1:34 pm
This is beautiful. I enjoyed it greatly.
 
roseann This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 5:08 pm
so beautifully written. the flow was perfect! hope she falls.
 
jesusluvsus said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 2:31 pm
I love that!!!
 
FlamingTaco1479 said...
Feb. 5, 2010 at 11:35 am
I absolutely love this. Beautiful work.
 
poetry4life said...
Feb. 2, 2010 at 6:54 pm
it's ssooo awesome may she fall JK
 
Jennifer C. said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 2:24 pm
my favorite poem from u :)
I always seem to be in a situation where I want what i can't have and i think thats the situation a lot of people find themselves in, good job :)
 
lemonygirl97 said...
Jan. 28, 2010 at 1:04 pm
Very, very nice. I love the imagery and the passion in this poem, nice work.
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 8:41 pm
awwww so awesome!
 
annkaykay2011 said...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 9:51 am
This is beautiful.
 
**talia** This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 26, 2010 at 4:16 pm
That was really good! Check out some of my writing?
 
fairyfreak said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 5:30 pm
Very nice poetry, you are one of the better poets on this website, well done.
 
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