You Were

September 6, 2009
By MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
one day the world will accept thing will always be the same, in that moment, everything will change.


You were the spark in my life,
You were angel in the strife,
You were the words on my page,
You were the actor on my stage,
You were the blood in my heart,
You were what tore me apart.
To think that i loved you.

You were my everything then,
You made me feel loved again,
With all that i was going through-
I looked up to having you.
I had a heart before you came,
Now all i have is a name.
and the memories of you.

Im happy i got to understand your the only one-
who makes me happy when im sad,
who calms me down when im mad.
I only wish you understood the pain im in,
being without you is the worst.
I wish you'd understand.

You became part of my life,
You became a piece of my heart,
I never expected you to stray.
Why were you taken away?
Just when i loved you.

You have no idea how it feels,
nothing to me was that real-
with anyone but you.
and you said you loved me to.
then i let my guard down,
i dont understand what you do.

I guess that i have to understand the way it is.
its not so new to me anymore,
ive been through you before.
I apologize i know mistakes i made werent right,
but you made the same ones too,
and i forgave you.



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pinkpaige said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:36 pm
your very welcome =)

your a great poetry writer =)

on Sep. 19 2009 at 1:43 pm
MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
one day the world will accept thing will always be the same, in that moment, everything will change.

awwwh... thank youu(=

on Sep. 19 2009 at 1:43 pm
MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
one day the world will accept thing will always be the same, in that moment, everything will change.

thank you a lot

pinkpaige said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 11:40 am
that was an amazing poem..i actually cried...and its funny i thought this was all in my head but by this i realized i wasnt the only one who had feelings like this...that was an incredible poem =)

on Sep. 18 2009 at 11:57 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
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Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

i love it. it totally reminded me about how i felt with my ex. it was amazing to read

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:32 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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ur wleocme :)

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:31 pm
MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
one day the world will accept thing will always be the same, in that moment, everything will change.

thanks alot.

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:23 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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well its a really great poem. i can totally relate to the feelings due to my recent ex. i really really enjoyed it

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:21 pm
MikaMarie SILVER, Montague, New Jersey
5 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
one day the world will accept thing will always be the same, in that moment, everything will change.

Thank you. It almost kills me to put my poetry out for people to see. i really needed that support.

on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:16 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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an amazing poem :) one of my favorites. i feel this way about my x so i can totally relate. good job. keep it up.


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