A Committed Crime

September 5, 2009
By sandytan BRONZE, San Francisco, California
sandytan BRONZE, San Francisco, California
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It's a horrible crime to steal.
You stole my heart away me.
I'm seeing you standing there not giving it back.
My emotions are now in your control.
You are shaking it hard, seeing what might happen.
I'm all shooken up wondering why do I love you.
The reason, my first love, is that I can't seem to let you go.
If I can please have my heart back I maybe able to say forever goodbye.

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on Sep. 17 2009 at 7:20 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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i can totally relate to the sitiuation and emotion. very well written. well done.


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