What Do You See?

September 5, 2009
By Layton GOLD, Abilene, Texas
Layton GOLD, Abilene, Texas
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I've just been shot can anyone help me?
I'm in so much pain can't anyone else see?
The pain getting worse as I'm starting to die,
you all stare and laugh as I cry.

I love you so much it's making me sick,
I'm searching for a peice of you where I can just stick.
Holding my tongue to keep you from thinking,
but look what I've said without even blinking.

Outside you're smiling but I know you don't mean it,
everythings is telling me you don't care one bit.
Show yourself and don't let me see,
you know I didn't mean it but you still attacked me.

It's time I stop loving you I don't want to care,
I can't even write without feeling you in the air.
I hate that I want you and that you wanted me,
why am I this crazy what do I even see?

The author's comments:
About a girl who had been driving me crazy.

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on Sep. 16 2009 at 10:44 pm
ctrisha3 SILVER, Phoenix, Arizona
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Really really relateable, really good poem!




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