Into That Dark Night

September 4, 2009
I sat and thought about you.
Like I often do.
I thought of you with love today,
And kindness too.
I wished that you would notice me,
I wish that you could know.
That I really do love you,
I thought that it showed.
I wished that I could see you,
Your blue eyes shining bright.
Now you’re gone forever.
Deep into that dark night.

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Audrey M. said...
Jun. 5, 2011 at 6:56 am
My problem with rhyming is that usually it cheapens the poem that it's in, and it makes it sound like something out of Dr. Seuss. But the rhyming doesn't cheapen this poem and it really works. Great job. :)
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