Into That Dark Night

September 4, 2009
By Logan1095 BRONZE, Vidalia, Georgia
Logan1095 BRONZE, Vidalia, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
"Never doubt that a small group of determined citizens can change the world; indeed it is the only thing that ever has." - Margaret Mead


I sat and thought about you.
Like I often do.
I thought of you with love today,
And kindness too.
I wished that you would notice me,
I wish that you could know.
That I really do love you,
I thought that it showed.
I wished that I could see you,
Your blue eyes shining bright.
Now you’re gone forever.
Deep into that dark night.


The author's comments:
This is my first poem or story. I just wrote about someone loving someone, and having them in their life. Being in love with them, and the person losing their loved one forever...

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on Jun. 5 2011 at 6:56 am
trademarkoperation SILVER, Lake Peekskill, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Those who dream by night in the dusty recesses of their minds wake in the day to find that it was vanity: but the dreamers of the day are dangerous men, for they may act their dreams with open eyes, to make it possible. ~T.E. Lawrence

My problem with rhyming is that usually it cheapens the poem that it's in, and it makes it sound like something out of Dr. Seuss. But the rhyming doesn't cheapen this poem and it really works. Great job. :)


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