Death isnt an option

September 4, 2009
By iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
iPonder GOLD, Elk Grove, California
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Favorite Quote:
The bad things happen first,then the good things, then more bad things, then more good things: God helps us through the bad things so we can enjoy the good ones. :)


She was walking toward my desk
I stretched out my leg
I sat there in anticipation
I wanted her to fall
Shatter a bone or two
What daemon would place her in the same class as me?
Sprain an ankle or two.
I wanted her to be in pain
Because of her my heart was in pain
Physical pain doesnt compare to emotional pain
She would have gotten a cast and her pain would have ceased due to the perscription the doctor persribes
While my heart would be scattered on the floor like shattered glass
B****.
Yeah I want her to fall
Death isnt an option
She has to suffer
The creature destroyed everything connected to Frankenstein
She made me into a monster
She took him away from me
She gave me nothing in return
She fell.
For some reason
I wasnt satisfied


The author's comments:
sorry for any offensive language. I have not hurt anyone in my life. Maybe an ant or two but never a person. The person I am talking about is a girl I do not know she is just someone who means alot to me girfriend. The only thing i feel for her is pure envy.

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LastChapter said...
on Feb. 1 2011 at 5:14 pm
LastChapter, Hempstead, New York
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(couldn't think of anything better at the time) "Take the first step in faith. You don't have to see the whole staircase, just take the first step."-Dr.Martin Luther King Jr.

i agree with hepburn about the  last 3 lines. but i also liked how "death isn't an option". it really gives depth to the narrator's rage and hatred. keep writing!

hepburn said...
on Jul. 14 2010 at 10:59 am
hepburn, Assd, Other
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i love the last three lines :)

on Sep. 30 2009 at 8:37 pm
unwrittenlove DIAMOND, Mount Berry, Georgia
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"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, its yours forever. If it dosent, then it was never meant to be" -anonymous

I loved it! Keep writing!




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