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She was walking toward my desk
I stretched out my leg
I sat there in anticipation
I wanted her to fall
Shatter a bone or two
What daemon would place her in the same class as me?
Sprain an ankle or two.
I wanted her to be in pain
Because of her my heart was in pain
Physical pain doesnt compare to emotional pain
She would have gotten a cast and her pain would have ceased due to the perscription the doctor persribes
While my heart would be scattered on the floor like shattered glass
B****.
Yeah I want her to fall
Death isnt an option
She has to suffer
The creature destroyed everything connected to Frankenstein
She made me into a monster
She took him away from me
She gave me nothing in return
She fell.
For some reason
I wasnt satisfied



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LastChapter said...
Feb. 1, 2011 at 5:14 pm
i agree with hepburn about the  last 3 lines. but i also liked how "death isn't an option". it really gives depth to the narrator's rage and hatred. keep writing!
 
hepburn said...
Jul. 14, 2010 at 10:59 am
i love the last three lines :)
 
Kaitlyn S. This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Sept. 30, 2009 at 8:37 pm
I loved it! Keep writing!
 
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