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You Say

You say you love me but i don't see it
You say you want to be with me but don't act like it
You say forever but forever isn't lokking so good
You say i'm the one but i don't feel like it
You say i'm different but i don't feel different
You say you're changed because of me but you still act the same
You say always but always isn't happening
You say were perfet but it doesn't feel perfcet
You say we're right but it doesn't feel right
You say i'm cool with your friends but they ignore me
You say your family love me but they don't like it when i come around



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Kat2292 said...
May 17, 2010 at 4:04 pm
I like the style you used here. Good job! I've never felt that pain (thank goodness), but I can almost feel it from this poem. Keep writing! :)
 
iliketac0s said...
Mar. 20, 2010 at 8:17 pm
i like it :) it was pretty good.
 
choirchic101 replied...
Mar. 22, 2010 at 10:41 pm
thank you i appreciate the comment
 
choirchic said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 11:04 pm
thank you everybody who commented
 
bluemagnet22 said...
Nov. 5, 2009 at 2:58 pm
Vry Nice;) I like it:) u should check out some of my stuff =)
 
dreamer_believer said...
Oct. 4, 2009 at 4:20 pm
this is great! :) wow. i agree that boys can be the WORST...but hey, they make great subjects for beautfiul writing! :) you did a great job with this, and i absolutely love it :) 5 stars. check out and comment some of my work, i would love your feedback. looking forward to more of your stuff! :)
 
SarahZ said...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 5:51 pm
This is really beautiful. Guys can really stink...or be awesome...I'm waiting on awesome. Thanks for commenting on my poen. This is way better. Keep writing :-)
 
choirchic replied...
Sept. 22, 2009 at 9:59 pm
thnx. i wrote it because of my ex boyfriend
 
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