You Say

September 3, 2009
By choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken


You say you love me but i don't see it
You say you want to be with me but don't act like it
You say forever but forever isn't lokking so good
You say i'm the one but i don't feel like it
You say i'm different but i don't feel different
You say you're changed because of me but you still act the same
You say always but always isn't happening
You say were perfet but it doesn't feel perfcet
You say we're right but it doesn't feel right
You say i'm cool with your friends but they ignore me
You say your family love me but they don't like it when i come around

The author's comments:
The poem is basically about the stuff your boyfriend says to you but you see the exact opposite happening in your relationship. Its just telling the guy what you think.

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Kat2292 BRONZE said...
on May. 17 2010 at 4:04 pm
Kat2292 BRONZE, Canfield, Ohio
3 articles 1 photo 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If at first you don't succeed, call it version 1.0." ~Mark
"Life's like a novel with the end ripped out." ~Rascal Flatts

I like the style you used here. Good job! I've never felt that pain (thank goodness), but I can almost feel it from this poem. Keep writing! :)

on Mar. 22 2010 at 10:41 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thank you i appreciate the comment

on Mar. 20 2010 at 8:17 pm
shelterisland GOLD, Montclair, New Jersey
14 articles 0 photos 175 comments

Favorite Quote:
-Biting's excellent. It's like kissing only there's a winner."-Doctor Who, The Tardis

i like it :) it was pretty good.

on Nov. 5 2009 at 11:04 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thank you everybody who commented

on Nov. 5 2009 at 2:58 pm
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

Vry Nice;) I like it:) u should check out some of my stuff =)

on Oct. 4 2009 at 4:20 pm
jennee21_ann GOLD, Helper, Utah
17 articles 0 photos 568 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't gain the world and lose your soul....wisdom is better than silver or gold."

"You can always close a book, but you can never close the mind of a writer."

this is great! :) wow. i agree that boys can be the WORST...but hey, they make great subjects for beautfiul writing! :) you did a great job with this, and i absolutely love it :) 5 stars. check out and comment some of my work, i would love your feedback. looking forward to more of your stuff! :)

on Sep. 22 2009 at 9:59 pm
choirchic101 SILVER, Norwalk, California
9 articles 0 photos 196 comments

Favorite Quote:
in order for God to use all of you you have to be completely broken

thnx. i wrote it because of my ex boyfriend

on Sep. 22 2009 at 5:51 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
61 articles 36 photos 216 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'd rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I'm not"
"Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you."

This is really beautiful. Guys can really stink...or be awesome...I'm waiting on awesome. Thanks for commenting on my poen. This is way better. Keep writing :-)


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