Common

September 3, 2009
By JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands


Heart pounding, hard in my chest
Speech is hard to do
Hands shaking
Stomach feels butterflies
I go to him to talk
But all I can do is stare
Cheeks turn red
Open my mouth
Only silence escapes it
Blushing I turn away
Start to walk away
But I regain My strenght
I go to him
Heart pouding out of my chest
Open my mouth once again
Words fly out
I smile at him
I look at him
And find that he is blushing as well
I guess we have alot in common . . .

The author's comments:
My inspiration came from a special person that I truly like . . . might even love.

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on Mar. 18 2010 at 2:40 pm
mockingbirdsong GOLD, Russellville, Alabama
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Favorite Quote:
No judging, just loving.

I'm glad my encouragement could uplift you! Thanx 4 commenting on it, it's good 2 know my helpful words "help" someone or encourage them! I try 2 b possitive about everyone and give them something 2 brighten their face!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 1:18 am
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

I'm very glad you liked it thank you so much for the praise . thank you alot!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 1:16 am
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

LOL welli'm very glad you liked it and thank you for the encouragement!!

Muse16 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 19 2010 at 1:52 pm
Muse16 BRONZE, Omaha, Nebraska
2 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you don't like something changes it...if you can't change it, change your attitude about it."

Haha! Very cute and you were able to paint a realistic picture in my mind. Love It!!!!

on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:29 pm
mockingbirdsong GOLD, Russellville, Alabama
15 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
No judging, just loving.

Oops sorry about that, it's supposed to be the word "you", but I guess you could have figured that out by yourself! :)

on Feb. 14 2010 at 7:25 pm
mockingbirdsong GOLD, Russellville, Alabama
15 articles 0 photos 30 comments

Favorite Quote:
No judging, just loving.

Good poem! I liked it!

I liked the way you worded it,the pattern.

Keep up the good work! Oh and thank-you for your comment on my article, sorry it took so long to get back to thank-you, but thanks! Keep writing and follow your dreams!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 3:49 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

thanks so much glad i could paint a picture!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Jan. 27 2010 at 3:33 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

thank you so much i really appriciate ( is that how you spell it?? umm idk ) it! thank you so much!!

on Jan. 21 2010 at 1:02 am
XxXsuicidalxkissXxx SILVER, Tallahassee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
i'd rather be hated for what i am then to be loved for what i am not

really good ur a great writer :D

on Oct. 24 2009 at 8:03 pm
Ms.Understood, Laramie, Wyoming
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this article really describes a lot i could picture everything happening LOVED IT!

JackXD SILVER said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:11 pm
JackXD SILVER, Houston, Texas
9 articles 15 photos 64 comments

Favorite Quote:
this may not be a quote but i really love the lyrics-Trust in me the way I trusted you I know we could have done this together If you believed in me like I believed in you My heart would be forever in your hands-all that remains-forever in your hands

thank you so much! yeah it did for a while . . . hes my best friend now though i still really like the poem!

on Sep. 18 2009 at 7:41 pm
JenniferB. SILVER, Harvey, Louisiana
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It sounds like everything turned out ok by the poem, I'm happy for you!


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