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Heart pounding, hard in my chest
Speech is hard to do
Hands shaking
Stomach feels butterflies
I go to him to talk
But all I can do is stare
Cheeks turn red
Open my mouth
Only silence escapes it
Blushing I turn away
Start to walk away
But I regain My strenght
I go to him
Heart pouding out of my chest
Open my mouth once again
Words fly out
I smile at him
I look at him
And find that he is blushing as well
I guess we have alot in common . . .





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Muse16 said...
Feb. 19, 2010 at 1:52 pm
Haha! Very cute and you were able to paint a realistic picture in my mind. Love It!!!!
 
Eniliuqcaj replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 1:18 am
I'm very glad you liked it thank you so much for the praise . thank you alot!
 
mockingbirdsong said...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 7:25 pm
Good poem! I liked it!
I liked the way you worded it,the pattern.
Keep up the good work! Oh and thank-you for your comment on my article, sorry it took so long to get back to thank-you, but thanks! Keep writing and follow your dreams!
 
mockingbirdsong replied...
Feb. 14, 2010 at 7:29 pm
Oops sorry about that, it's supposed to be the word "you", but I guess you could have figured that out by yourself! :)
 
Eniliuqcaj replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 1:16 am
LOL welli'm very glad you liked it and thank you for the encouragement!!
 
mockingbirdsong replied...
Mar. 18, 2010 at 2:40 pm
I'm glad my encouragement could uplift you! Thanx 4 commenting on it, it's good 2 know my helpful words "help" someone or encourage them! I try 2 b possitive about everyone and give them something 2 brighten their face!
 
XxXsuicidalxkissXxx said...
Jan. 21, 2010 at 1:02 am
really good ur a great writer :D
 
Eniliuqcaj replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 3:33 pm
thank you so much i really appriciate ( is that how you spell it?? umm idk ) it! thank you so much!!
 
Jennifer B. said...
Sept. 18, 2009 at 7:41 pm
It sounds like everything turned out ok by the poem, I'm happy for you!
 
Jacquiline G. replied...
Oct. 7, 2009 at 3:11 pm
thank you so much! yeah it did for a while . . . hes my best friend now though i still really like the poem!
 
unfamil-LIAR-minds replied...
Oct. 24, 2009 at 8:03 pm
this article really describes a lot i could picture everything happening LOVED IT!
 
Eniliuqcaj replied...
Jan. 27, 2010 at 3:49 pm
thanks so much glad i could paint a picture!
 
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