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What if I Fall
September 8, 2009
What if I fall
Down from this cliff
Looking below
Only clouds block the abyss below
What if I fall
Will they catch me
I’d smile in pleasure
Fluffy white comfort all around me
What if I fall
And the clouds reject me
What is down there far below
What if I fall...
© Bret N., New Tripoli, PA
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This article has 13 comments.
OW!!! I love it hun!!! And i was always told that if you get the urge to write, write!!!! books, poems, stories, notes, diaries, journals, everything is in mind to write, i myself got the urge last year to start a book, i write on it every time i get the itch to, i have got 98 pages so far, but i write at least 5 or 6 poems a day, i havent posted but a few on here!!!! 5/5, keep going!!
Katherine93 GOLD said...
on Jan. 29 2010 at 4:35 am
how old are you in fth grade. is that like our year 5? not sure coz that would make you 9 or 10 ? anyways... this is fab, i love the clouds rejecting part. i totally understand this, lol. complete fear of rejectment. hahaha
alwayssunshine PLATINUM said...
on Jan. 20 2010 at 8:07 pm
Nice poem! I've read most of yours, and they're all deep!
P.S. I think we have the same first name! Elana?
P.S. I think we have the same first name! Elana?
SilverDawn GOLD said...
on Jan. 18 2010 at 10:34 pm
Beautiful poem! My favourite line was "What if I fall/ And the clouds reject me" haha :D i found it quite cute
rubielovee BRONZE said...
on Dec. 15 2009 at 6:58 pm
i like it good job.???
Lisette-Midnight SILVER said...
on Oct. 31 2009 at 11:14 am
Wow this is great keep on writing
Annabelle7614 said...
on Oct. 24 2009 at 10:20 am
Duuuude fourth grade? I was writing about starfish back then, and I stunk at it! This has symbolism and flow and stuff! Awesome!
LaylaViolet said...
on Oct. 22 2009 at 9:48 am
I liked this one the best!!! Sometimes I feel like I'm going to fall any minute, and this somes up those feelings perfectly. I would suggest that 'below' be taken out after 'abyss' (I know, I hate it when you can't change something once it's posted). Anyhoo, I'll make THIS one my favorite. Nice work! :P
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