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i walk along the lockers feeling invisible, people not caring knocking me out of there world,
but im just a girl possibly maybe
always gunna be invisible,
i smile as i walk along pass you
thinking im invisible,
needing you here while im invisible,
does any one care?





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Mr.Trex said...
Jun. 8, 2010 at 4:45 pm
i like the tone, i like the visual. felt like their could've been a bit more at the end. but it works well, and you should be proud of it.
 
ShernayB. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 22, 2010 at 8:02 pm
I know this feeling. Really great piece.
Please if you have time will you please check out my work, comment and rate if you wish. Thanks!
 
Jazzzy517 said...
Oct. 29, 2009 at 3:33 pm
i kno what that feels like... really well
 
tennisislovee34 said...
Oct. 22, 2009 at 8:23 pm
good good gooddddd, i can defintely relate!
 
Mr.Trex said...
Sept. 21, 2009 at 12:13 am
your good at expressing through writing, like the setting and focus. alot of teenagers go through this and it's never really been a majorly touched on subject. keep up the good work
 
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