invislible

September 8, 2009
By HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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i walk along the lockers feeling invisible, people not caring knocking me out of there world,
but im just a girl possibly maybe
always gunna be invisible,
i smile as i walk along pass you
thinking im invisible,
needing you here while im invisible,
does any one care?



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Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Jun. 8 2010 at 4:45 pm
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

i like the tone, i like the visual. felt like their could've been a bit more at the end. but it works well, and you should be proud of it.

on Jan. 22 2010 at 8:02 pm
ShernayB. DIAMOND, Southfield, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Some things will never change"---Tupac

I know this feeling. Really great piece.

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Jazzzy517 GOLD said...
on Oct. 29 2009 at 3:33 pm
Jazzzy517 GOLD, Meriden, Connecticut
17 articles 1 photo 45 comments

Favorite Quote:
Learn from yesterday, live for today, hope for tomorrow.

i kno what that feels like... really well

on Oct. 22 2009 at 8:23 pm
tennisislovee34 GOLD, Sterling Heights, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"Every moment of your life, you're writing. Even in your dreams, you're writing. When you walk the halls in this school you meet various people and you write furiously in your head." -Frank McCourt

good good gooddddd, i can defintely relate!

Mr.Trex GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2009 at 12:13 am
Mr.Trex GOLD, Salisbury, North Carolina
16 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
7 days a week, 52 weeks in a year we are all people here, we live, we love, we act suite. until that one day comes, death is the begining of life. Cody 6:17

your good at expressing through writing, like the setting and focus. alot of teenagers go through this and it's never really been a majorly touched on subject. keep up the good work


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