September 7, 2009

This night
Means the world to me,
Though I know it means nothing to you.

This night
I will remember
For the rest of my life,
Though I know you will forget it in a week.
Maybe less.
Maybe simply as soon as you see HER.
But I wish you saw me.

This night
I will spend hours getting ready,
Trying to look pretty for you,
Like I do every day.

You won't even notice.

The author's comments:
Sometime i just feel so invisible... You know?

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on Jun. 26 2011 at 12:20 am
Warm_My_Heart GOLD, My City, Other
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“Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.”
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This is beautifuly constructed, and is very close to what I have felt, if not it. This is magnificent. Great job on all of your work.

on Apr. 14 2010 at 12:21 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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Wow thanks so much! It's really nice to hear some feedback once in a while. And I would love to read your work! :)

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on Apr. 11 2010 at 5:34 pm
cree8ive GOLD, Billings, Montana
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"Our deepest fear is not that we are inadequate. Our deepest fear is that we are powerful beyond measure." Mariane Williamson

Wow. I love this, and yes I do know how invisible feels. I love this poem because it connected to me so much that I felt like I could have written it. I've noticed that about several of your poems. You have such an incredible talent for reaching into the depths of human emotion and extracting a feeling and refining it into a poem. I also really like your style. Really, really good job. If you'd like to take a look at any of my work, I'd really appreciate any feed back.

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