Do You See These Tears?

September 7, 2009
I cry
As I lie awake in bed,
Stuck with your voice running through my head,
Wondering why you said what you said.
You didn't love me -
How hard could it be
To say what you wanted right from the start?
We were never meant to be apart.
All that you did, it was so low;
I'll always wonder why you let go.

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Warm_My_Heart said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 11:57 pm
The endings to your stories are all wonderful.
Toe_The_Line said...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 1:18 pm
Wow. I like this quite a bit. Could you read some of my stuff? I'd really like your insight. Thanks.
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Feb. 22, 2010 at 7:41 pm
Sure thing! :)
Reader:) said...
Dec. 3, 2009 at 10:33 pm
your poetry IS emotion
Anjo! said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 6:51 pm
I LOVE THIS ONE. its short and sweet, but oh so amazing!
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 10:26 pm
:D thank you! it applies to a lot of different people in my life actually, that's what i really like about it is that i can find support by reading it in a lot of different situations
Anjo! replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 10:29 pm
yeah, i can totally see that in the poem. This is like my top favorite =]
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 11:04 pm
:) yay!
the thing says i gotta write more so anyway... yeah... that should do it.
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