Him <3

September 7, 2009
The way he laughs;
The way he smiles;
The way he makes those cute,
annoying little noises when he's bored;
The way he brushes back his hair when it's in his face;
It all just seems
So perfect.
So right.

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Warm_My_Heart said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 11:56 pm
This is a very beautiful writing. Again, amazing.
Toe_The_Line said...
Feb. 24, 2010 at 11:06 am
Love this poem. I would go into further detail... but I'd like to thank you for all your comments on my work! Thanks for actually pointing things out specifically... not a lot of people do that. buhh. I'm part of another website, inkpop .com , that i think you'd really like... you should check it out, and add me as a friend. i'm under they_call_her_amphetamine. that website has a ranking system, where you pick your favorites instead of just RATE them, and they move up on ... (more »)
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Feb. 27, 2010 at 6:32 pm
yes i do try to be specific with my comments cos thats what i like on my work, thank you for noticing. :) and yeah, that sounds awesome thank so much for the suggestion, i will almost certainly join when i get a chance :)
iPonder said...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 7:01 pm
haha i read ur explanation lolz priceless. love ur work hehe i consider u my bestie on teenink xD
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Oct. 23, 2009 at 10:42 pm
haha no way, me too! lolz but no, seriously, that totally just made my day, thanks! :)
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