Him <3

September 7, 2009

The way he laughs;
The way he smiles;
The way he makes those cute,
annoying little noises when he's bored;
The way he brushes back his hair when it's in his face;
It all just seems
So perfect.
So right.

The author's comments:
Haha, yeah he actually turned out to be gay. So that must be why...

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on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:32 pm
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yes i do try to be specific with my comments cos thats what i like on my work, thank you for noticing. :) and yeah, that sounds awesome thank so much for the suggestion, i will almost certainly join when i get a chance :)

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Love this poem. I would go into further detail... but I'd like to thank you for all your comments on my work! Thanks for actually pointing things out specifically... not a lot of people do that. buhh.
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on Oct. 23 2009 at 10:42 pm
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haha no way, me too! lolz but no, seriously, that totally just made my day, thanks! :)

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on Oct. 23 2009 at 7:01 pm
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haha i read ur explanation lolz priceless. love ur work hehe i consider u my bestie on teenink xD

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