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Him <3
September 7, 2009
The way he laughs;
The way he smiles;
The way he makes those cute,
annoying little noises when he's bored;
The way he brushes back his hair when it's in his face;
It all just seems
So perfect.
So right.
So...
Him.
© Liana D., Somers, CT
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Warm_My_Heart GOLD said...
on Jun. 25 2011 at 11:56 pm
This is a very beautiful writing. Again, amazing.
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 27 2010 at 6:32 pm
yes i do try to be specific with my comments cos thats what i like on my work, thank you for noticing. :) and yeah, that sounds awesome thank so much for the suggestion, i will almost certainly join when i get a chance :)
Toe_The_Line SILVER said...
on Feb. 24 2010 at 11:06 am
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I'm part of another website, inkpop .com , that i think you'd really like... you should check it out, and add me as a friend. i'm under they_call_her_amphetamine.
that website has a ranking system, where you pick your favorites instead of just RATE them, and they move up on the list and you can see all the top pieces... and you can send messages back and forth with other writers. i like it better than this one.
just a thought! thanks so much for your feedback! hope to get an inkpop request soon. :)
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 23 2009 at 10:42 pm
haha no way, me too! lolz but no, seriously, that totally just made my day, thanks! :)
