Forever Love

September 7, 2009

I shall love thee
Till the polar ice caps melt
And the world falls straight out of the solar system.
I shall love thee
Till the burning pits of Hell
Freeze over with all the resemblance
Of the polar ice caps lost so long ago.
I shall love thee
Till the coffin I rest in
Has rotted away along with all memory of me.
I shall love thee
Till the light of the sun
Fades away
And all the stars in the solar system
Have gone out.
I shall love thee
Till there is nothing left of anything
But empty space.
I shall love thee
Forever and longer.


The author's comments:
I wrote this a long time ago. I don't even remember who it's about anymore. (Haha irony...)

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on Jun. 25 2011 at 11:50 pm
Warm_My_Heart GOLD, My City, Other
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Favorite Quote:
“Too often we underestimate the power of a touch, a smile, a kind word, a listening ear, an honest compliment, or the smallest act of caring, all of which have the potential to turn a life around.”
Leo F. Buscaglia

This is a very sweet story. Beautiful.

on Dec. 19 2009 at 7:15 pm
Littleabby18 SILVER, Henderson, Nevada
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i love it. it kinda scares me. lol keep wrighting.

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:08 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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haha, no prob =]

on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:06 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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oh my gosh, that's a really great piece of advice! god, i can't believe i never thought of that lol i spend so much time and energy trying to find the right word when i could be writing really powerful stuff. awesome, thanks lol

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 4:00 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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Haha, dont thank me, thank the thesaurus. it saves my life when im writing, Thesaurus.com is my best friend =]

on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:52 pm
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. PLATINUM, Longmont, Colorado
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ooooh, that sounds way better! thanks!

Anjo! SILVER said...
on Sep. 19 2009 at 3:48 pm
Anjo! SILVER, Roseburg, Oregon
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ooh, i like it! i didnt like the "have gone out" line for some reason. you dont have to change it but i was just seeing if you would like to put "have gone cold" ... but thats my opinion, and you dont have to take it. =] but i like it. its awesome

iwantcoconow said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 11:00 am
iwantcoconow, Bronx,ny, New York
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I Really like this poem


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