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Forever Love

I shall love thee
Till the polar ice caps melt
And the world falls straight out of the solar system.
I shall love thee
Till the burning pits of Hell
Freeze over with all the resemblance
Of the polar ice caps lost so long ago.
I shall love thee
Till the coffin I rest in
Has rotted away along with all memory of me.
I shall love thee
Till the light of the sun
Fades away
And all the stars in the solar system
Have gone out.
I shall love thee
Till there is nothing left of anything
But empty space.
I shall love thee
Forever and longer.




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Warm_My_Heart said...
Jun. 25, 2011 at 11:50 pm:
This is a very sweet story. Beautiful.
 
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Littleabby15 said...
Dec. 19, 2009 at 7:15 pm:
i love it. it kinda scares me. lol keep wrighting.
 
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Anjo! said...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 3:48 pm:
ooh, i like it! i didnt like the "have gone out" line for some reason. you dont have to change it but i was just seeing if you would like to put "have gone cold" ... but thats my opinion, and you dont have to take it. =] but i like it. its awesome
 
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 3:52 pm :
ooooh, that sounds way better! thanks!
 
Anjo! replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:00 pm :
Haha, dont thank me, thank the thesaurus. it saves my life when im writing, Thesaurus.com is my best friend =]
 
.xCutMyLifeIntoPiecesx. replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:06 pm :
oh my gosh, that's a really great piece of advice! god, i can't believe i never thought of that lol i spend so much time and energy trying to find the right word when i could be writing really powerful stuff. awesome, thanks lol
 
Anjo! replied...
Sept. 19, 2009 at 4:08 pm :
haha, no prob =]
 
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iwantcoconow said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 11:00 am:
I Really like this poem
 
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