You Bend Until You Break MAG

September 15, 2009
By Michelle Guilbault BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
Michelle Guilbault BRONZE, Peoria, Arizona
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You stood where no one can see you,
Where no one would notice you.
Were you wishing someone would call out your name,
So you could walk over and feel wanted?
Are you discontented?
Have you been yearning to belong?
You felt like your world was caving in,
Yet you would never admit it, although I could see it.
You have all these fears and no one to tell them to.
Is this what you call pain?
Is this the point where you’re finally going to claim your life back?
Just gather yourself together and leave.
There’s nothing here worth saving anyway.
Your world is caving in and I can see it.
I see the pain you’re in.
There’s nothing left now, trust me.
Get up and reclaim what’s yours.
Your world is caving in, but I’m here to help you.
I’m here to fight with you.



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on Jan. 22 2010 at 3:21 pm
Beautiful. I loved it :) I write as well..pretty similar writing styles really.

on Oct. 19 2009 at 11:33 am
Phantom_Girl GOLD, Ft. Carson, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"If it comes out of the lion's mouth...it will be on the test."
-Mr. Bala

It reminds me of a song called "Stand"

Awesome poem. Congrats on being published. You really deserved because this poem is incredible.

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on Sep. 18 2009 at 5:51 pm
Jaquie BRONZE, West Palm Beach, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
This is certainly one of my favorites: "I will become even more undignified than this, and I will be humiliated in my own eyes." -2 Samuel 6:22

Very nice. I really enjoyed this piece.

Congratulations on being published.

God bless,

...,

on Sep. 15 2009 at 5:52 pm
I like it a lot, it reminds me of a song called "The Blues,"

on Sep. 15 2009 at 4:31 pm
LoveLikeWoe DIAMOND, LeSueur, MN, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Whoever laughs first has the sickest mind.

AWESOME!! i'm totally speechless. this was really good!


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