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Leaving So Soon?

Friendship gone on for too long to let go, sense of humor never

Going to end, love in the hearts of younger ones, hope


In ones eyes, prays for the lower classmen



Mind set on a main goal, new chall-




Enges to face or to over





Come, trying so






Hard to





Become better and




Brighter, changing your old



Ways to new ones, looking for something


New to hold onto, never forgetting the past, so

Many memories shared, such precious time wasted on
Fights that were pointless anyway, smiles shared, cries heard

From far beyond, but wait what happened, did it all


Go by to fast for us to catch up, I’m gonna



Miss so much, I’m leaving a school




That has become my 2nd





Home, so much






Time has





Passed by my eyes




I won’t forget the loving faces



Because now I’m leaving maybe too soon


Am I leaving too soon, I’ll be back though but when will I be



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writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 9:34 pm
this is so good so never change it & keep writing.
 
AstericPetals This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 11:05 am
Very interesting poem, great job.
I loved the lines: "Hard to
Become better and
Brighter, changing your old
Ways to new ones, looking for something
New to hold onto..."
That really struck me, and I feel like I can really relate to the emotion that you are conveying with this piece.
If you get a chance--please check out some of my work! I would love the feedback. :-]
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 2:32 pm
Great! I like the emotion of the poem.
 
Sheston said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 6:38 pm
This is a very good poem!! Good job:)
 
Requiem said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 9:00 pm
I like this.
 
Erika E. said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 6:15 pm
I love your word choice, it flows great!
 
keyboard_musican said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 2:29 pm
i love it :)
 
heaven said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 11:37 am
this is awesome just no tht it never to soon:)
 
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