Why..?

August 28, 2009
Why..?
Do I See..
The Pain In Her EYES..
The Tears When She CRIES..
It's Almost Like..







She DIE'S...

....Why....

cant anyone else hear her asking for help..
dont you see all she needs is just a little bit of love and care..
..or was it just to much to bare..?





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ToriA. said...
Sept. 16, 2009 at 8:00 am
awww! awwww! wow, you've struck me speechless! awww. i loved it, so true, so true.
 
Undiscovered said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 8:06 am
Man you are so observant i mean its stranger to find people in this world who feel so much!!
by the way it was just amazing and touching!!
 
Megan Anne S. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 2:17 pm
Very very beautiful and lovely.
 
blackamethyst said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 7:43 pm
I love this poem. It's so amazing
 
blackamethyst replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 11:14 am
I don't have a myspace or a facebook sorry. I wouldn't mind talking though :)
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 4:00 pm
Awesome poem! So short and simple, but sends a great message in a few short verses.
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 6:19 am
I don't have a Myspace
 
Courtney W. said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 7:46 pm
Wow very deep love the emotions i catch from your writin!!!
 
blingblang4eva said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:44 pm
this is how i feel about one of my friends. perfectly written. well done
 
~*The-Broken-Hearted-Girl*~ said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 4:51 pm
really good!!! :)
 
heaven said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 11:39 am
this is so true and real.keep up the work.
 
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