I Hope Your Happy Now That I&#39m Gone.

August 27, 2009
By RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
RachyRach333 SILVER, Cedar Rapids, Iowa
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I hope your happy now what im gone.
I should of new you where lieing all long.
You made up a person and pretended to go along and, left me hurting for this long.
I hope your happy now tht i'm gone.
I should of knew you where fake all along.
You took my hart an whached me fall.
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.
Ive been lied to, for way to long
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.
I gusse I never really never knew you all along.
My Heart still broken, but I'll stay strong.
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.


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on Sep. 14 2009 at 6:17 pm
XxXCoco_KittyXxX BRONZE, Rapid City, South Dakota
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great poem

on Sep. 14 2009 at 11:17 am
zeller48 BRONZE, Saint Albans, West Virginia
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best poem i have ever seen !!!!

on Sep. 13 2009 at 6:13 pm
i loved your poem..it was awsome!

on Sep. 12 2009 at 7:52 pm
MorningStar15 DIAMOND, Orange, Vermont
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100% lovable it was awesome :)

on Sep. 12 2009 at 12:07 pm
Lucky7337 SILVER, Paris, Tennessee
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Wow. I can definitely relate to this. Yes, the spelling is distracting, but does not detract from the true message. Awesome.

on Sep. 11 2009 at 6:49 am
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

this is amazing.

Brndi said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 1:00 pm
very good poem but need to make sure things are spelled right... it is a bit distracting but i loved the message of the poem... and i can relate! very excellent work keep it up!!

Lisha BRONZE said...
on Sep. 9 2009 at 9:58 am
Lisha BRONZE, Karachi, Other
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It's a nice poem :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:46 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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an excelelent poem :) the spelling errors were a lil bit distracting. but it was amazing overall :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 12:24 pm
HeavenCooley GOLD, Stillwater, Oklahoma
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very good,excellent.


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