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I hope your happy now what im gone.
I should of new you where lieing all long.
You made up a person and pretended to go along and, left me hurting for this long.
I hope your happy now tht i'm gone.
I should of knew you where fake all along.
You took my hart an whached me fall.
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.
Ive been lied to, for way to long
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.
I gusse I never really never knew you all along.
My Heart still broken, but I'll stay strong.
I hope your happy now that i'm gone.




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Kylie A. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 6:17 pm:
great poem
 
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Timmy Z. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 11:17 am:
best poem i have ever seen !!!!
 
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live your life well said...
Sept. 13, 2009 at 6:13 pm:
i loved your poem..it was awsome!
 
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MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 7:52 pm:
100% lovable it was awesome :)
 
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Kimberly S. said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 12:07 pm:
Wow. I can definitely relate to this. Yes, the spelling is distracting, but does not detract from the true message. Awesome.
 
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writer24/7/365 said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 6:49 am:
this is amazing.
 
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Brndi said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 1:00 pm:
very good poem but need to make sure things are spelled right... it is a bit distracting but i loved the message of the poem... and i can relate! very excellent work keep it up!!
 
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Lisha said...
Sept. 9, 2009 at 9:58 am:
It's a nice poem :)
 
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blingblang4eva said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:46 pm:
an excelelent poem :) the spelling errors were a lil bit distracting. but it was amazing overall :)
 
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heaven said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 12:24 pm:
very good,excellent.
 
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