i wish it was this easy

August 24, 2009
By Anonymous

i see you looking at me
and i wonder why you've never
paid attention to me so why now
my heart is beeting faster for iv
liked you for so long and now
your looking in my eyes as you offer
me your hand you ask me out
i say yes and your eyes are so intense
your gaze is so amamzing
and i feel so loved
honselty iv never felt so happy
and so incredebly safe.


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Undiscovered said...
on Sep. 14 2009 at 8:15 am
Well when i started readingh this poem it felt so real so true but gradually it became fictious for me! but that's for men otherewise it was just splendid!!

on Sep. 10 2009 at 7:53 pm
blackamethyst GOLD, Centerville, Ohio
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I love this poem! I can relate :)

on Sep. 8 2009 at 5:12 pm
purplemusician SILVER, Columbus, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"those who matter don't mind, but those who mind don't matter" ~ Dr. Seuss

this is so true!!! i love it! although i do think you could play around with it a little more. maybe a comparison of some kind or something.




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