August 24, 2009
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you hear all these love songs
and valentines is near you see
all the happy couples and wish
they werent there. you wonder why
your all alone and theres no one
to hold. but someday soon
you may be the one thats
cuddling and in love.

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Ashlynrae said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 9:51 am
Yeah I agree that a few more lines would finish it nicely. But I like this piece a lot!
OLIVIA!!!!! said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:16 pm
i really like what you have got going so far i think if you added some to it it would be even better because i feel like you arent done with your train of thought
i do like it though, check my poems out if you get the chance.
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