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She's innocent.
A child.
Her blonde curls astray.
Tears running down her face.

She's scared to the bone.
She tries to do everything right,
But it doesn't keep him away.
He screams, shouts, and hits.
She can smell the alcohol on his breath.
Its almost as strong as the smoke stench.

Her mom can't protect her.
She's passed out on the couch.

This innocent liitle girl is shaking.
She needs protection.


Will you protect her?



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Julia L. said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 10:51 pm
tha was absolutely amazing. in 16 lines you wrote something that is so tragically true in so many cases and made me want to cry. amazing.
 
MorningStar15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 8:07 pm
WOW... i loved it... so awesome... i've never read a poem that was so true and powerful before... beautiful, just like heaven i hope the girl is okay...
<3.
Kayla
 
Ashlynrae said...
Sept. 12, 2009 at 9:52 am
This piece has a lot of emotion in it! A great read!
 
penguin35 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Sept. 11, 2009 at 2:34 pm
Amazing poem! So sad! I feel bad for the girl. Great descriptions.
 
Brndi said...
Sept. 10, 2009 at 12:54 pm
this is a really great poem it made me think back to my own childhood... i was so deathly scared of my stepmom and my dad was always at work... and i was so scared to tell my dad what was going on.. VERY GOOD WORK
 
blingblang4eva said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 5:52 pm
this poem is emotional and quite amazing. it makes me feel so bad for the poor girl
 
heaven said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 12:30 pm
i will protect this innocent girl!!:)
hope she okay and doing alright.
 
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