Breaking Life

I am a Angel,
Broken and falling
I am a Devil,
paying for my Sins
I am a Ghost,
not seen by my peers
I am a Flower,
that shall never bloom
I am a Star,
Not bright enough to be seen from a far
I am a rock,
Breaking under the pressure
I am a Bird,
Without wings to fly
I am a Soul,
Lost and never found
I am a God,
without worshippers
I am a Life,
Breaking and ending
I am nothing worth your time





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caughtinaxm0ment said...
Jan. 18, 2010 at 11:43 pm
This is really powerful.
I love the strong metaphors in your piece (:
 
Natie said...
Sept. 14, 2009 at 2:34 pm
Hi Im the person who wrote "Moonlight" and if you want I could post up the first chapter of it or I could send it to you by email or something,because I really wanna know people's real oppinion of it, so please if it seems like it sounding to be alot like Twilight please remind me...And by the way, your poem is so great
 
Kc~to~thy~night~I~shall~belong replied...
Sept. 17, 2009 at 11:47 pm
I would love to read the first chapter and give my feedback. I've read plenty of books, and twilight is one of my many favourites. So, I'll definalty tell you if it's sounding to similar, but from what Iread you have your own unique story line.
 
Casey H. said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 7:31 pm
aww thanks, I love hearing peoples thoughts
 
blingblang4eva said...
Sept. 8, 2009 at 6:01 pm
i love the metaphors
 
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