Breaking Life

August 31, 2009
By NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
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I am a Angel,
Broken and falling
I am a Devil,
paying for my Sins
I am a Ghost,
not seen by my peers
I am a Flower,
that shall never bloom
I am a Star,
Not bright enough to be seen from a far
I am a rock,
Breaking under the pressure
I am a Bird,
Without wings to fly
I am a Soul,
Lost and never found
I am a God,
without worshippers
I am a Life,
Breaking and ending
I am nothing worth your time


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on Jan. 18 2010 at 11:43 pm
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

This is really powerful.

I love the strong metaphors in your piece (:

on Sep. 17 2009 at 11:47 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
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I would love to read the first chapter and give my feedback. I've read plenty of books, and twilight is one of my many favourites. So, I'll definalty tell you if it's sounding to similar, but from what Iread you have your own unique story line.

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on Sep. 14 2009 at 2:34 pm
Natie SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"Struggle as hard as you can for whatever you believe in" -ahaha thats from a Fortune Cookie :D

Hi Im the person who wrote "Moonlight" and if you want I could post up the first chapter of it or I could send it to you by email or something,because I really wanna know people's real oppinion of it, so please if it seems like it sounding to be alot like Twilight please remind me...And by the way, your poem is so great

on Sep. 8 2009 at 7:31 pm
NeverSayNever GOLD, Lumby, Other
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aww thanks, I love hearing peoples thoughts

on Sep. 8 2009 at 6:01 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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i love the metaphors


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