Summer Day

August 30, 2009
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The green grass is blown gently
by a cool breeze.
Decorated with flowers,
all colors of the rainbow.
The clouds in the sky, all fluffy and white,
float slowly by.
Small sparrows flutter
around in this beautiful sky,
adding some music for all to hear,
the melody of nature's song.
A beautiful day,
in the wonderful season of summer.

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purple_ashes said...
Dec. 28, 2010 at 12:04 pm
This is really great and beautifully written! Nice job! I especially liked the part about the music :) Check out some of my stuff!
Lost-In-Life replied...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 11:54 am
Thanks, and I will check out some of your work!
purple_ashes replied...
Dec. 29, 2010 at 2:27 pm
Thanks so much! :)
sleeplessdreamer said...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 1:13 pm

Cute. Unique because most people post dead serious stuff on here. But it wasn't cheesy. Nicely done.

If you could check out my work sometime I would appreciate it so much!

Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 30, 2010 at 6:49 pm
Thank you so much! Of course I'll check out your work!
LittleMissWhimsical This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2010 at 10:14 pm
Aw! This is cute! Very pretty.
Lost-In-Life replied...
Jun. 7, 2010 at 5:48 pm
Thanks! I appreciate the comment!
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